So this story is my first please let me know what you think.
~Chey's P.o.v~
Hey so my name is Cheyanne but my friends call me Chey. I was at my older brother Kyle's house and we wanted something to do so, we walked to the movie theater. As we were walking we heard foot steps behind us, I turned just as two hands grabbed my brother and I. I squirmed and kicked and my brother cursed and punched the guy but it was no use he was to strong. he took us to a dark alley way and beat my brother up until he couldn't move.
Then he came over to me and slapped me hard across the face I did the only thing I knew how I screamed. I tried to run but the guy had me pinned down he put a knee on my chest he took his hand and punched me until I was unconscious. When I woke up I was in a white room with an iv in my arm and a guy standing over me. I jumped a little when I saw him I blinked a few times until my vision was clear the person over me was Andy Biersack from Black Veil Brides. I asked breathlessly, "why am I here? Where is my brother?"
~Andy's P.o.v.~
I answered back with "you were unconscious in an alleyway with a guy on top of you. Your brother is in another room." She looked at me with a questioning look on her face and asked "how did you find me?" I answered back with "we heard screaming from the pizza place we were at and came running to the sound but, by the time we got there you were knocked out and the guy tried to rape you."
A tear fell from her cheek I wiped it away carefully as not to hurt her. I asked her what her name was "Cheyanne but my friends call me Chey" she replied giving me a weak smile. She then asked what happened in the alleyway "well when we got there the guy got up and ran at me and tried to hit me but I caught his arm and twisted it and kicked the back of his knee and knocked him to the ground. we got to you and your brother Ashley and Jinxx picked your brother up and carried him and C.C. and I carried you." "we ran to the hospital and got you guys help which explains why you are here."
~Chey's P.o.v.~
Andy had just explained why I was here I let out a tear and he wiped it away. "c-can I s-see my brother?" I asked with all the strength I could muster. Andy went to get a nurse who came in and took the iv out of my arm Andy held out a hand and helped me out of the bed. I stood on my tip toes and kissed his cheek and whispered thanks into his ear. He then took me to Kyle's room, where Ashley and Jinxx were watching the still sleeping Kyle I walked over to him and grabbed his hand and leaned over and kissed his cheek.
I looked at the now five guys that were in Kyle's room and looked back at Kyle. I couldn't help but let a few tears fall at the sight of him his lip was busted pretty bad and his right eye was black and purple but not swollen. I started singing quietly his favorite song Walk by Pantera. Tears were just streaming out of my eyes by now and he started to move and squeezed my hand but nothing else. I laid my head down and cried my eyes out I felt a hand on my shoulder and looked up to find a sympathetic five pairs of eyes on me.
End of chapter one please vote and comment what you think *hugs*
~Chey~