Author: AnneJunio1
Critics: dcmuch
Genre: Romance
Target Reader: 17-year-old and above
1. Cover – the font is classic but it fits the image simplicity. 'Scratching my shoulder' May sipa siya kaso Chicklit agad ang naiisip ko NOT for Romance.
2. Blurb - Personally, ngayon ko lang na-encounter sa blurb ang may numbering o enumeration. It really makes a BETA READERS snob your piece to one reason – excessive details/filler. Dahil nasimulan sa simplicity – extend it to your blurb. Simplify it by telling the three places then leave a hint. One sentence of explanation is enough. Why she just stayed with those places ONLY? Put some mystery, it doesn't mean na romance 'yan, panay kiligan nalang.
I'm pretty sure, you are aware of TAG-LISH disease?