Well beyond our world (on hold)

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If i can remember rightly, we were moving into the Cranberry house. I'm not sure why it is called that, but it is. So anyway, it was a nice summer's day, beginning of August ans we were all unloading the van and car. The house smelt of sweet roses and pizza; but im guessing it smelt of pizza because we had ordered pizza a half hour before we had arrived. The birds were singing and it all seemed like a quiet friendly neighborhood.

Our new house was a pure white house with some orange patterns around the doors and windows. it had plant bedding all the way around the outside walls. But to me, i think that it was all just a typicalo country house where everything is just perfect. You could feel the warmth or the house when you walked in.

Me and my little sister Amanda played a bit of Frisbee for a while before going inside the house to explore. The frisbee went over the otherside of the road and landed on some lawn, i didn't bother looking at the house because of it was just going to be the same as all of the others and so i went to fetch it, the me and Amanda ran into our house after unloading the last boxes from the van and car.

We both ran upstairs to claim our rooms, but the confusing thing was that both the bedrooms that we could pick from were identical except for the colour. there was a bed, a table, and an empty cupboard; all in the same place in both the rooms. We went to have a look at the master bedroom, also known as mum and dad's room. As we walked in to the master bedroom and the first thing that we noticed was the view of the creepiest house EVER! I'm surprised that i hadn't noticed it before.

It looked dead; dead black and empty.

We could hear this knocking noise, we looked over the balcony from the master room, we had some guests already and they had explained it all. The neighbours had come over with some food as well as a welcome present. There were so many differnet types of people and the most impressive childrentoo. The children were all dressed very smartly and spoke very politly; Their hair was all very neat and not one strand of hair stood out. There were loads of men and women; there were even at least ten women who were pregnant.

Well, mum being mum, went and invited them all in, but none of them expected any food or drinks as we had only just moved in and not even unpacked anything to eat with. So they were just at our house for a bit of chat really.

And do you know what the first thing that just about every single person had said was?

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