The Flooded City

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The Flooded City By:SecretlyWriting

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Short Story and Fantasy

10 pages (1 part)

PG- 13

August 25, 2011

Summary:

Have you ever asked yourself where you came from? Who you are? Those are questions Lily never had to ask herself until the day she was cheated on and led to a secret place for special people, but she was just a young journalist, how special could she be? There will be a sequel, I will upload it on wattpad only if people will like it and comment it.

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I found the spacing to be weird, it would be a line or two and then big paragraphs. (I know there are complainers about spaces for some reason like it so big of an issuse to have spaces.) For the most part its written correctly with commas and such. The story is pretty much straight forward and just as the summary says.

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