3rd person pov
"There it is" said the person in black. His pal in red and yellow asked "What is there?" The man in black says " The enemies".
Man in black pov
"The enemies", I say and look at this young man and silently cry. The world is messed up and he is going to die, I just know it. At this point I hear commotion down there and see the villains make a move. These guys are vampires, like most of Gotham now a days, and they found some of the human resistance and going to take them to the leader of the vampires in Gotham, Gelqua. I tell the man with me and in a matter of seconds I use one of my smokebombs to make a distraction, while the kid shoots at the vampires. Oh shoot he was just killed, I need to fight.
Lead Vampire in group pov
"Where is that man in black" I yell. Dumb and dumber exclaim "I don't know" and then he appears, a man in full black with a purple gun with a yellow tip. He shot 6 of the 7 guys with me and tried shooting the 7th, but ran out of bullets. The 7th guy ran at him, but he just smiled and let his fangs elongate. Wait, he has fangs, he's a vampire! He then bites the guy and smiles at the pain of the guy screaming. I yell at him "You will pay for your crimes". He simply laughs and pulls off his mask. I finally see his face, it is white with black soulless eyes, green hair and an evil demonic red smile. He comes over to me and puts his hand on my shoulder, and says "Are you trying to be funny" he looks me straight in my eyes and says "that's my job". I jump and throw a jab at him, he ducks and puts his hand in his pocket and questions me "Do you know the substance known as vampiric ash, the element that burns the skin of any vampire?" I of course dumbly say "Yes". He then pulled out a concentrated amount and throws it at me. While I am in pain he comes over and hits me with a bat. I ask him "who are you?" He simply says "Names Mr.J, but you can call me the Joker." With that he leaves me on the ground with the humans free to leave
AN
This is my first book and first chapter please critique me, but make it more positive than negative and don't just say I suck.
