Misconception

Ending

Scene 8: crime scene

Scott sits there, staring into nothing. Then the phone rings. It's the detective

Scott: yes? Another murder? Where? Okay I'll be right there.

He puts on his jacket and runs outside? They are on a sidewalk. There lies a dead body.

Scott: so, who's the victim?

Detective: Scott, listen I'm sorry about your children... It's just

Scott: that's enough. I just want to know the victim.

Detective: it's another mother.

Scott walks over to the victim. He looks around. His eyes widen when he sees a necklace and picks it up.

Scott: this was the necklace I gave Eleanor! She was here! Maybe...maybe the person behind these...this mother massacre took her here!

Detective walks by him

Detective: yes, and I have a theory. I think the man is the same as the one who killed your wife and all the other moms.

Scott: I need or find them.

Scene 9 crime scene 3

The next day. The phone rings. Scott gets up and picks it up.

Scott: hello

Detective: we got another murder.

Scott: what? Is there anything important?!

Detective: we found something.

Scott: what?!

Detective: a note, with... an address.

Scott: Really?! What is it?!

Detective: I already searched it. It's your old house. The one where your wife was murdered

Scott: what? I'm going there right now!

He runs off leaving the phone

Detective: No! Okay, we need to be there too.

Scene 10: showdown.

Hope is throwing stuff at the door trying to get out.

Hope: let me out!

Man: shut up! Ever since I kidnapped you you've been screaming!

Hope: please... Please *starts crying*

Scott: *knocks door* is anyone there?

Hope: what?!

Man: oh no!

Scene changes to hope and Eleanor. A loud clatter happens. The door broke.

Hope: help!!!!!!

Man: get over here! *he grabs the gun*

Scene changes yet again to Scott. They are already inside the house.

Scott: Hope!?!?!

Hope: dad? Help!

Scott gasps as he turns around to see Hope. The mans arm is around hers and a gun is to her head.

Man: Let me go... And no one gets hurt!

Scott: where's Eleanor

Man: you never cared for her!!! It's not her fault she was born sociopathic!

Scott sees the mans clothes.

Scott: Eleanor?

Eleanor takes off the mask.

*FLASHBACK!*

Juniper and Scott are talking yet again. It is the same as the first scene!

Juniper: She's to violent. Just imagine when she grows up!

Scott: *ensuring* Listen, honey, we talked about this. It WILL work out.

Juniper: I know but it won't be long till she does it again. We need to tell her. We need to tell her that....

[interruption]

Eleanor: Tell me... What?

Juniper: oh honey, hello.

Eleanor: tell me what?

Then there was a gunshot. Juniper was dead. Scott was knocked out. Eleanor got up and looked at the corpse and... Smiled

Voice over from Eleanor: I can't help it. The urge.

Scene goes back to Eleanor and Scott standing off.

Eleanor: I'm gonna do it! *She brings Hope closer*

Scott: stop Eleanor! Stop!

Eleanor: no, I need this. *cocks gun*

Scott: STOP!!! *cocks gun too*

Eleanor: dad! I need this!

Scott: No!!!

There is a gunshot. No one knows who it is. The scene changes.

Scene 11: the end

Scott stands there, hope by her side.

Hope: dad, how's Eleanor doing?

Scott: I don't know, let me talk to the doctor.

Scott walks to the corner for a little, then comes back.

Scott: Eli, Eli's not doing good. *On the edge of tears*

Hope: i love you dad.

They hug.

The scene changes. Eleanor is there on a bed.

her eyes open all of the sudden.

MISCONCEPTION