Ok so this is my first fanfic so please give me some constructive criticism. I will go through my chapters and edit them when im done with them. ok thank you and bye
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Our Second Life (o2l) Broken
Teen FictionThis story is about a girl named Dawn Darrington she lives in long island, new york she just turned 17. A week later her mom gets lung cancer. Dawn finds out her only family lives in California and his name is Ricky Dillion. Will she have to go move...
Our Second Life (o2l) Broken
Ok so this is my first fanfic so please give me some constructive criticism. I will go through my chapters and edit them when im done with them. ok thank you and bye