SetoBrine (original by @Zerothewizard)

Chapter 1: The beginning. (original I know)

Hello and welcome to my redone version of zerothewizards SetoBrine story thanks for reading and enjoy.
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Setos pov:
I hear a knock on my door than a voice say "Hey Seto do you want us to go with you to help you get your potion ingredients?" Why on minecraft would they ask that question? Do they even know what ingredients they would be looking for? But they are making the effort to try to make it up to me so should I agree? "Sure you guys can come and help i'll meet you guys by the western gate in like 5 or so minutes." "All right cool we will meet you there." Man I dont know about this I have a bad feeling that somethings going to go wrong. Everythings going to be fine calm done Seto you are just over reacting,but what if something is going to go bad? Are you really going to such a bad friends that you don't even show up after you told them you would. Wow you really are pathetic. No I will go meet up with them after I get my book and bag for ingredients. Im sorry Voice. Its fine but you should go meet up with them now so you can see just how much they dislike you. What do mean by that Voice? None of them are going to show up just to mess with you to make it seem like they care. If you go you will just be letting them laugh at how stupid you are. But they are my frien- They don't care about you get it through you thick stupid head that THEY DON'T LIKE YOU THEY NEVER HAVE. I- I want to go to see if your right. Fine but don't come complaining to me when you see that I was right.
Time skip of magicalness because I can so shush it.
So everyone is actually here to come help... I thought that they were lying. Seto seto seto you really are so gullible aren't you. Im sorry Voice, but I really want to have some friends it gets so lonely being by myself all the time. Aren't I your friend Seto haven't I always been there for you when they were not in you dar-
"Hey Seto are you okay?"
Wha "I'm fine why do you ask?" Please don't let then figure it out....
"You were whispering to your self." "I'm fine,it's nothing." "If you say so. So when are going to start this journey?"
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So what did you guys think of my first chapter?
Time duration it took to write this story 3:00 pm to 5:59pm (forgot to write date but it was August 12 - August 12.)
Hope enjoyed the story. If you want to you can leave criticism, but make it nice criticism don't just be like " This story shit you should stop writing" Because I wont hesitate to report you for being unfriendly and rude. Well thats all for now and I will see you all later byyyyyyeeeee 💙