From The Pit Of My Stomach

Friends...💖

Friends are the life of us,

Wherever we go and whatever we do.

Even if we are going in the bus

With them, everyone tells we are the zoo...

Little do they listen to others.

But, deaf they can make everyone.

We are like sisters and brothers.

Together we have quite a lot of fun...

For a long time with them,

We can't be angry.

Although we have cold or phlegm,

Surely they'll make us very hungry.

Because they eat all our food, 

Let it be so bad or too good!!

They take our pens, pencils rulers and erasers,

And they'll never ever return those.

And at the end of the day, empty will be our purse.

We go home expecting from mom a lot of dose...

I have only friends, who just select other friends,

Only seeing their qualities and characters.

Not for their Mercedes, SUVs or Benz.

Their friendship and loyalty only matters...

My former school friends – I really do miss them...

They are very, very, very rare – Just as the rarest gem...

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I tried a lot + a lot, and reduced to 24, 24 lines...

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