Re-Done Suduction Scene

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Okay, so yes this story was indeed adopted by @LilithElenaFlame but when I wrote it at the time I was a young naive Ace who had no clue how to write....*Cough* not that I'm much better now *cough* but I still felt the need to redo this one scene because it is.....so cringe...so cringe....

So here it is! The redone seductions scene from chapter 1!
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"AHHAHAHAHHHAHAHAHHA!!!!!!!!!!!!" Lavi burst out laughing "Th-The Beansprout! SU-SEDUCING PEOPLE!?!? AHAHAHHAHA"

"Idiot Rabit, I taught her pretty damn well...She can even seduce me if she tries.." Cross said

"I don't mean to be rude Cross but that doesn't seem to hard.." Lenalee said

"Tch! Baka Deshi! Go seduce Lavi over there!" Cross yelled at Allen

Allen nodded and started walking towards Lavi was still laughing very hard. The whole order was watching..

Allen got pretty close before Lavi noticed her, "La-vi~" Allen said before getting close and moving his hand out of his face by swiping her own and nocking it away.

"Ummm.... Al-Allen what are you doing??" Lavi took an unsure step back moving towards one of the tables.

Allen licked her lips and smirked before taking another step forward, pushing Lavi back again. Everyone was watching over as the people who were at the table shifted away to give her room.

"Whoa whoa wait a minu--" Lavi was cut off as she took another step. He of course stepped back but the bench was at knee level, his knees buckled as he slumped down slightly. He put his arm up in front of his face as he grew hot with a blush.

Allen leaned over him as Lavi slumped down even further and attempted to reason," L-L-Let's be r-rational here!"

In a swift motion Allen grabbed Lavi wrist and slammed his hand into the table forcing him to look up at her. Simultaneously she pushed her knee in between his thighs and onto the bench stopping just short of touching him.

"A-A" Lavi couldn't even forum a sentence as Allen giggled and used her free hand to tuck her hair behind her ears; she leaned her head down and put her mouth by his ear.

"What is it my bunny~?" Her voice was dripping with a deep lust and confidence hinted at with a playful after thought. His observations were quickly cut off as he felt Allen's tong dart out and lick his ear lobe. She proceeded to stand up, letting him go and bringing a hand to her mouth she giggled. Lavi felt dizzy and slumped over exhausted, confused, and very very impressed.

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So ya! There you have it! The redone subduction scene! I don't read Much smut (if at all) but hopefully this was a bit better!

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⏰ Last updated: Aug 24, 2017 ⏰

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