Comments...Concerns...Reaad!

Okay, I thought I made some clear points on Aetilas story, 'Golden Dawn' which I do very much think (I can't think of the other word!!! Ohh! Recommend!!!) You

should ALL read!

1. I just have to point out about vampires and really anything in general. Most of the time if the majority of the people become obsessed with something (Ex: Vampires), only then will most other people begin to criticize it (say they don't like it, think it's stupid, ect.) only cause they like to be different (I don't think this includes everyone, but most of the time this is how it happens) and when people read stories that state your (the authors') actual opinion, people will begin to agree lol I just think that's interesting and I know I am weird for pointing it out but oh well :)

I think that the idea of vampires and like the species is kind of fascinating cause so many people change the stories and add new things and I don't really know what vampires began as, but they are kind of like people, slowly evolving but always keep some of the same characteristics.

I like reading stories about things other than vampires but I think it's cool to see what kind of ideas people, that do write about vampires, come up with and change.

2. I like when people use odd names (if you can tell from my stories but they aren't that different..I guess)but I guess if many people used odd names then, the names that used to be common would be odd and vice versa, odd isn't it?

3. I also like when your idea is original because you are very creative and I think everyone is capable of coming up with their own, unique ideas like a lot of people on Wattpad

And I would also like to point out that:

1. Some people say things like the stories on the What's Hot List aren't always the best, but that puts people down even if you don't know you are doing it. People feel accomplished when they get on the list...let them...most of the time they are good.

2. Just because a story is about vamps or werewolves, doesn't mean it isn't good; try reading it before you say anything!

3. People that have stories that aren't on the What's Hot List are good too, check them out!

4. Keep writing don't ask people if you should cause it shouldn't matter, you should only need to please yourself when it comes to your writing

5. Take people's criticism as them wanting to help you, they like your story & want 2 help you let them.