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The Good Pyscho

The Good Pyscho by Spade_05
Genre: General Fiction

Summary:

Jane and her father are inseparable. The thing is they are both the leaders of a Bostonian gang called the Black Spades. What happens when Jane loses her father? Will she want revenge? Or live her life regretting tht one birthday dinner at her favorite restaurant?

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Cover (5/5) - I really like the picture of Jane.

Plot (8/10) - I really like the idea of the main relationship being Jane and her father (maybe it's not, I don't know; I didn't read the whole book). The prologue was a little telly, but that I understand. The first chapter was also pretty telly and it progressed a little too fast than I liked, but I really liked the idea of the story and having her father be killed on her birthday.

Originality (9/10) - The gang thing is a little over used, but overall I think it's a pretty orinigal story.

Format (4/5) - Some of the dialogue didn't make sense, but other than that the format was pretty good.

Spelling/Punctuation (3/5) - A few spelling errors, but nothing too bad. There were more punctuation errors than spelling errors.

Grammar (3/5) - There were a few grammar errors, but again, nothing too bad.

Overall, I enjoyed this story. Again, it's a little telly and progresses fast, but I really liked the story idea and it was pretty good. I think I'll continue to read this. (:

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Sorry I couldn't get to this until now, Spade_05. I try to do things asap, but I have a lot of life going on. 😂 Also, sorry that this wasn't my best review. I only had about twenty minutes to do it. If I get more time later I'll go back and add some more feedback. (: