I rewrote this and it kinda made me upset to see a mean comment please its hard to do this on a small keyboard on a phone I only want good comments after seeing that I dontknow uf I want to make any more please be nice))
"Im so bored..." Suki said hanging off the couch, "hey Suki have you seen Germany any place?" Asked Italy pecking into the room " no not yet... he said he would come her at 7 he said his brother Purssia wanted to spend time together... and by that they mean time to get drunk together" Italy came in and sat just like me and smiled at me, I smiled back at him I got up to lay in bed and fell asleep
~~~ few hours later(Sukis view~~~~~
((Sorry I can not Do accents))I woke up to someone shaking me a little "what?" I said irateded "What? You no want to see me then?" I opened my left eye that was blue and everthing was bury then my right green one my vison had to focus for a sec then I could make out blond hair that was pushed back and two blue eyes "Ludwig!" I yelled quickly getting up and hugging him "open your mouth" "hu?" I hit him and he opened "... you dont smell like alcohol...." I looked at him "I did not drink with Purssia at all I was with him but I refused to drink" I smiled at him when he had that accent. He sat down with me and smiled " does Italy know you are home?" "Nien" "why don't you tell him?" "I dont need him running around and bothering us..." he said with a smile and huged me tight I sat there he threw off his shirt to be comfy and he layed down with me and then I started to fall asleep again but I jumped when there was a knock 'god I hate living with all the other countries here in this place' i thought to myself and snugled closer to Germany "what the hell you want?!" He yelled, I could feel his chest rumble when he yelled and he felt Me tremble from his voice and held me closer "Germany? Why you in suki's room Dude?" It was America... great "nothing that consers you!" He yelled and moved but I moved closer " dont... im super cold right now" I whispered to him I felt him nod and I was in his chest "come on dude! Let me in! I need to talk with you" "then why would you come to Suki!?" "To find out were the hell you are, she always knows" it was silent for a sec and Germany got up and opened the door a little "what?" "Dude were is your shirt?" "What hell you want?" "I wanted to talk about the next meating because I got a awesome idea and-" *SLAM!* Germany slamed the door shut on America "not cool dude! Not cool!" "Go eat a Burger!" Germany yelled getting back in bed with me "another stupid idea for the meeting?" "ja" was all Germany said "Ludwig" "hmm?" He said looking down at me "the other countries will find this out you know... like America" "well... let them" he said as he kissed me lips very soft "but..." "it will be fine... I will not let them hurt you or take you from me" he said holding me close to him we both fell asleep when I hurd the door creep open with out warning Germanys eyes shoot open and he pulled a gun out of no were and pointed at the person "calm yourself bro" "Purssia! why are you in here!?" He yelled. He looked very pisses off at purssia "cant check on ya?" "Go....out" purssia put his hand up and left
~~~~~ That night~~~~~~
I was tired and exusted it was a long day as the country's started to fight, again... I hatted it when they did that it mad me feel like it was my fault, I walked in my room floped on my bed and my face in my pillow, I felt a hand rub my back and glanced to see Ludwig so I smiled at him "stressed Suki?" I nod in my pillow, he keeps rubing my back and I relax under his hands and start to drift asleep but I open my eyes when he stops and I mumble, I turn over to look at my German lover and he layed next to me, I kisses him but he grabbed my sides and pulled me ontop of him, "Ludwig...." he only looked at me, his eyes looked on my 2 odd colored ones I kiss him and he places his hands on my side and gets me shirt off, with out another second he is attcking my neck with kisses and nips, I let out a small moan and he goes to get my bra off, within a few minutes im laying under him, he had his jacket and shirt off, I had trouble getting his pants off, Ludwig helped me and he was in his Nations Flag boxers, I smiles at him and seen the bulge in his pants, he kissed me again and I pulled them down showing his large member the first thing in my head was 'THAT'S NOT GOING TO FIT!!... this is going to hurt like hell' almost like he was reading my head he whisked in my ear making chills go down my spine "I will be genital" with that he pushed me on my back and lined up, and started to push himself in, a moan escapes my mouth and wrapped my arms around his neck "ah! Sie so fest, meine Liebe" it drove me crazy hearing him talk his native tongue and I spread my legs a little more and threw my head back feeling him almost all the way in he stoped and pushed against my barrier "ah!" I yelled as he put pressure, "sind Sie bereit?" I nod knowing the little German I knew, he pulled back and thrusts fast and deep in me making me scream, I was silenced by his lips on mine, he did not move waiting for me to get use to him being in me, he pulls back wanting to move I nod a little bit so he can move, Ludwig pulls out almost all the way and thrust back in her deep and fast, I scream in prure pleasure and he moves faster kissing my neck and down my body, After a while I feel a knot in my stomach and I tighten around him"I...im...s...s-so...c-c-close!!" he moves a bit faster and deeper, I wraped my legs around his waist and scream when he hits that one spot "LUDWIG!!" I scream out as I cum hard on to his member, followed by him "SUKI!!" he screams Cuming after me, he lays next to me and smiles, that night we did it a few more times in a row