"La Habitacion Del Nino" - "The Baby's Room"

This is the first (short) story i try inspired from "el cuarto del bebe" translated to "the baby's room" horror movie and been modified to be a short story. I hope you guys like it. (NOTE: characters names have been changed)

Here it goes.

Saturday afternoon Rodrigo and Elena just married had looked for a new house for about three weeks straight with no luck on finding something nice and suitable for their new born baby. Either the neighborhood was bad or the house needed to many repairs. "pull over here" said Elena, Rodrigo slowed down and parked the car in front of a large antique house that seemed okay from the outside and the neighborhood wasn't bad at all, it seemed like a quiet place.

"You like this place?" Rodrigo asked Elena as he got of the car. "Sure, its got everything weve been looking for". Rodrigo hoped on the back seat's of the car get the baby "hope your right about this cuse its the last house im going into" replied Rodrigo.

4 days after moving into the house they notice that the nice house wasn't being sold cheap for no reason. Rodrigo noticed that someone or something was living with them, something that they couldn't see but could hear. Thursday morning Rodrigo decided to take the day of from his new business to go out and buy a set of camera monitors and baby monitors that would allow him to see who or what was living with them.

After setting up his new systems in the house he decided to give them a try "cameras check! Baby monitors! Every thing seems to be in order..." lifting up his coffee mug to take a sip noticed one of the TV monitors was static the camera image wasn't clear so he decided to take a look at the camera. The camera seemed to be functioning that's when he heard the baby crying in his room, but that was impossible Elena had taken the baby for a check up. Rodrigo rushed into the baby's room hopping Elena had come back with jimmy. Unfortunately the baby wasn't in its room and Elena hadn't come back but he could still hear the baby crying.

Panicking Rodrigo grabbed a wireless camera and its monitor and headed to the baby's room noticing that what the screen in the Monitor didn't show the room he was in. The camera was able to capture another image incapable to be seen by the naked eye. It seemed to be the baby's room but in a different dimension. The room he was looking at with the monitor seemed to be from a few years back. The room had wallpaper in the walls a large shelf where the door to the restroom stood and the only similarity was that both dimensions had a baby's cradle, except one room had a baby and the other didn't. "What the devil is this?" asked Rodrigo. "Its the evil version of your life" said a voice behind him. Drastically turning back Rodrigo found out that the guy who answered back was himself except pail. "who are you, what do you want?"

"im you... And i whant my life back"

"i - i don't understand"

"you see Rodrigo within every person theirs an evil inside him waiting to burst out, they just don't know it. The man started walking around Rodrigo "this place work's like a giant mirror except it reflects a persons bad side." Rodrigo remembers about the baby in the cradle and asks "so if your the one hunting my house why was i hearing my son crying?"

"Inorder to get to your dimension i need you and the closest thing to you as a scarifies"

"Why the baby? Why not Elena?" asked Rodrigo

"she's not from your blood" said the man in a low tone

"whats gonna happen to her?"

"ill take care of her"

With a smirk on his face the man took a blade out his jacket and said "Oh no - no, no, no, i would never hurt my self as in for the baby... He's gotta go"

Elena and the baby where never heard from again. Rodrigo that is the man left the house and disappeared leaving no trace behind.