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Girl In The Mirror House

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Title: Girl In The Mirror House
Author: @TheUnicornThatLovesBTS

                          
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You did say it would move fast, but I think you could expand this a bit more, and maybe add some atmospheric properties?

                          
Definitely moving too fast here, you could improve it, you could add more drama, you could do it a little bit slower, add some tension here.

                          
I like this, I like how this is going, but, I can't stress enough, it's moving too fast. You need to slow down so people really get what you're  saying.

                          
I would rate ch.1 as 
⭐️⭐️⭐️/⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ because it is very rushed, and there are quite a lot of grammar mistakes. Because of this, I couldn't really 'get' what you were trying to say.

                          
~Part Reviewed By Steren
StardomNightly 

                          
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