Im new to this , so if you guys have any critique or feedback . comment
chapter 1
" Mckenzie hurry up we are going to be late to the movie " I yelled . It was the first showing of Fault in are stars and I wanted to leave early so we could get good seats. " Hold your horses Sophia , I'm almost done putting on my mascara " she said .
I was wearing a fault in our stars crop top, denim shorts and my blue vans. Mckenzie was also wearing a fault in our stars with her favorite pair of skinny jeans and a pair of sandals . We both did a mirror check and made our way to the movies .
At the movies..
" oh my gosh, i'm so excited ! " Mckenzie said . Just as she said that a group of five boys were walking into the theatre . I tapped Kenzie's shoulder " why do those boys look so familiar " I whispered, she looked down two rows where the boys were sitting . " OH MY GOD SOPHIA THAT IS ONE DIRECTION !! " she screamed but whispered .
I could believe my eyes, one direction is sitting two rows in front off me. I swear i couldn't breath, I had to talk to them .I pulled Mckenzie out of he seat and dragged her down the isle .we only had 10 minutes til the movie started so I have to make this quick. " hurry up Kenzie you're taking to long " I said while she was trying to keep up.
In that moment THE Niall horan turned around and looked right at me and said " hello beautiful " I swear I almost die ." hi , um im Sophia and this is my friend Mckenzie and i was was wondering if we could get a picture with you " I said . " sure , let me get the boys ". as soon as I could flash a smile four more boys were looking at us smiling . " well this is Zayn, Louis, Harry , and Liam " Niall said . " hi, l'm sophia " I said . I looked over at Mckenzie to see if she would introduce herself, but her and harry seemed to be stuck in la-la land or something. " oooh it looks like harry fancies someone " louis yelled . which was a bad thing because suddenly every person in the theatre was looking at us.
" looks like we are going to have to see another showing " Niall said as me and the rest of the boys ran out of the exit.
so what do you guys think ?
