Crumbling Heavens

Chapter 1 - "Jian Chen"

Late in night hour, in some dark corner of the manor at the Jian Manor House

"How did this happen?!"

Jian Zu, Elder of Jian Clan was furious.

He stared at the steward, his eyes are spitting fire!

"I clearly told you there can't be absolutely any mistakes!! How is this boy still alive!!"

"Master your servant is useless, i did what you asked me to do. That witch's potion was really potent. But the luck of this boy is too strong!"

The steward was shivering in fear.

"You useless thing!!"

Bang!

One slap and the steward dies

"This is bad. If patriarch gets to know about what all had happened and connects it to me then my death is inevitable!"

"You seem a little tense Elder Zu... seems like you have failed this time"

At same time a shadow emerged from behind Jian Zu...

The voice belongs to a handsome young man in his twenties, golden blue robe extruding the portrayal of a sovereign, black hair fluttering in the dark night winds with a solemn look on his face and an aura of a natural born king... a sneer was apparent on his dignified face

"You have put me in a very steep situation young master Yuo, I'm afraid if patriarch gets a word on this then you and I are in for a huge trouble"

The man Jian Zu was talking to was the first young master of the huge Jian Clan, Jian Yuo.

"You are worrying too much for naught Elder Zu"

"There is no way that father would ever know about what has happened and  i have taken care of the witch and all that poisonous aura has been dispelled from 'that' place as well. The only thing that seems bizarre is why is that brat still in coma and not dead. His heart has stopped but his qi is still not willing to disperse..."

"Young Master Yuo, this is still a huge problem for us because if that brat manages to pull himself from death's door then we all will be doomed"

Jian Zu says with furrowed brows.

"What do you mean, Elder Zu?"

Jian Yuo asks in a serious tone.

"He saw me near the poison formation right before losing consciousness"

Jian Zu gets more stressed when he reached to this point.

Jian Yuo stands there silently as a cold gleam utterly subtle but visible deep in his dignified eyes

'No matter what this brat needs to die or it'd do me no good if father gets to know... and as for this Elder Zu... hmph i'll have to handle him too'

Jian Yuo thought to himself 

.........

At the same time when all this was happening... in another plane... another world...

"Master!!!!... Master!!!"

"I will fight the heavens but i will make sure that your will remains eternal!!!"

Whoosh!

A body falls through the 9th sky and disperses into the wind...

"Oh Lord of eternal will! If there is still justice in the world then let me discard my soul and sacrifice it for my master's incarnation!!!"

"You imbecile!!... did you think that your master would survive after having incurred the wrath of the Heavenly Emperor... he brought it all upon himself"

"You shut up!!"

"You're the reason he died!!... you traitorous wench!!!... i will kill you!!"

Bang! 

Two bodies collide.... heaven and earth shakes to its very core... 

"You are just an idiot... he's gone... this world is doomed without him, if you don't leave now then your end is inevitable"

"I was brought up by master, he treated me as his own child... he was my world, i don't care what that heavenly emperor thinks of himself but i will never abandon my masters home... i'll wait till he comes back!"

"Ha Ha Ha!!"

"You're too naive... you still think he has any hope of returning. Heavenly emperor has extinguished his soul, there's no way he's coming back now"

"I believe in him... his will shall not be erased as long as heaven and earth exists"

Luo Ran whispered under her breath...

.........

Jian Manor

A boy seemingly pale and close to death was lying on a silk spread...

The room was surrounded by guards to ensure nothing out of order happens...

"This is tragic for young master..."

"If this is what heavens wants for our young master then we shall accompany him till death"

Two guards loyal to the boy lying inside were worried...

Inside the boy's body something bizarre was happening... life and death vein were in continuous turmoil plunging the boy into eternal darkness....

A deathly aura and an eternal will.... in a continuous struggle....

"I was the greatest overlord under nine heavens and this little death is of no obstacle to me!"

"Disperse!"

The boy's body experiences a jerk... in this dark night a pair of cold blooded deathly eyes have opened...

"This body... this soul... who is this boy?"

"His name is Jian Chen??!!"

"What's happening!... I was killed by the Heavenly Emperor and now i have reincarnated in this child's body?"

*sigh*

"HAHAHAHAHA!!"

"This is too good! You may have perished my body and soul but couldn't disperse my will!"

A deathly aura rises from Jian Chen's body... a cold deathly gaze which seem to plunder the whole world into chaos... 

"If it is the will of the heavens then I shall not comply... you have taken everything from me... destroyed my world... crumbled my dignity. Then I JIAN CHEN THE GREATEST OVERLORD UNDER NINE HEAVENS SHALL CRUMBLE THE HEAVENS ITSELF!!"

(i know its a lot vague and doesn't really get to the story straight away... but lest not forget that i am still in the process of framing the plot so... cross your fingers and sit in anticipation about the protagonist.... coz no matter what you say, the main character gotta be a character ruthless enough to be badass!!)