Os:TWO UNCOMPLETED SOULS
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Mumbai..
A boy z sleeping in his room on king size bed seems like he loves sleeping
Suddenly a lady come in his room
lady:manik putar ydh ja office ni jana kya
(MANIK MALHOTRA:rich stubborn love his dadi n his gf may be)
Man:hmmm 5 min or Dadi..
(Yes dat lady z manik dadi)
Dadi:udh ja chal fir ghao bi jana h na
Manik get up jerkly..
Man:kyuuuuu
Dadi:kyu kya maine bola na toh bas jana h
Man:kya dadi apko pta h na ap jo bolte ho vo m kabhi mana ni karta
Dadi:pta h or ha us kabutri ko maat le jaiyo
Man:dadi uska naam ALIA h
Dadi:ha ha jo bi h vo nhi jaygi tere sth
Man:okkk nhi jaygi..
(ALIA KAPOOR:manik gf n model behind manik money only)
Dadi:chal ab
Manik go for bath n get ready for office..
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Dinning hall
Manik come down n eat brkfst
Dadi:aaj shaam ko 4 baje chala jana okk
Man:ha chla jauga
Manik left for office..
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Manik complete gis wrk n inforn alia abt his leaving for Rampur village
Alia acted on ph.like she cares manik n wanted to go wid him bt in actual all dis fake
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Village:Rampur
A girl z running n few people behind her
She z running n running only
Suddenly a car come n she bump wid it
Car gate open n manik come out
Man:have u losted maarna h kya
Now we can see her hairs n flowing in air n her eyes only bcz its almost night
Girl stand up n down her head
Girl:maaf kariyega
Man:bloody villager..hatoo ab
But suddenly few people come n caught dat girl
They r not touching her only make a circle around her
Per:Nandini yh tune thik ni kiya
(Yes Dat girl z Nandini:villager girl dont know english properly)
Manik z still stand dere n saw all dis
The grp of people move towards nandini with fire its like they burn her
Manik cme in front of nandini
Man:kya kr rhe h aap yh
Per:tumhe kuch ni pta hatoo yha se yh chor h isne roti churai h
Man:toh kya hua
Per:yh chor h or isse saza milegi
Manik suddenly hold her
Man:agar kissi ne isse touch bi kiya na toh dekhna
Village people moves backward
Manik turn n saw nandini he lost in her beauty
Nan:hume bacha lijiye yh hume maar denge
Manik encircle his hand around nandini n stand in front of village people
Meantym few village ladies also come n shock
Lad:hey bhagwan yh kya ho gya
Manik bcme confuse
Man:kya mtlb h apka
Lad:aree tane iss nandini ko chuha ab thareko isse shadi krni hogi
Manik bcme shck
Man:kya...
Manik move aside
Lad:ha hamare ghao m agar koi mard kisi ladki ko chuh le toh use usse shadi krni padhay
Man:wat nonsense m asa kuch ni krne wala
Per:krna padhega warna iss ladki k sth sth tujh bi marna hoga
Manik bcme hell shock
Dere z no option left Manik marry wid nandini forcefully.......
In way of Mumbai..
Nandini z crying bcz she left her house n village bt manik z soo angry ki yh kya ho gya
Manik stop d car
Man:can u plz shut up ek toh pta ni kaha se m tumare sth fass gya or upar se pta ni ghar jake kya hoga
Nandini stop crying n sleep
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Mumbai..
Manik n nandini enter in house
Dadi bcme shock
Dadi:manik yh kya h
Man:dadi plz bht lambi kahani h m thak gya hu m apne room m ja rha hu
Manik left..
Dadi cme near nandini
Dadi:beta yh sb kya h
Nan:ji vo hamari or unki shadi ho gyi h
Dadi:kya...kaise
Nandini narrate whole stry to dadi
Dadi:chl koi ni ab se tu meri bahu h
Nandini touch dadi feet
Dadi:accha tu aram kr le thsk gyi hogi
Nan:ji pr kaha jau
Dadi call servent n order him to see nandini manik room
Servent show manik room n left
Nandini cme inside n amaze to see his room
Manik cme out from bath room n shock+angry
Man:hey u tumhe kisne ane diya mere room m
Nan:ji vo...
Man:shut up n listen yh shadi m nhi manta iska koi mtlb ni h thik h or ha meri dadi ne jarur tumhe apna liya hoga pr m tumhe kabhi apni biwi nhi manuga...gawar
Nandini hurt badly n tears cme from her eyes
Manik get ready n left to meet alia
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Nandini z setting in hall wid dadi still in her wedding dress
Dadi:chinta na kr putar manik tujh apna lega
Nan:nhi dadi ji vo nhi apnayge unnone bola ki vo iss shadi ko ni mante
Dadi:maan jayga hmmm abhi tu kapde badal le
Dadi gve her cloths
Nandini change her dress in manik room only n come down
Soon nandini make a good bond with dadi..
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Alia house
Manik tell alia abt his shadi n all drama
Alia bcme angry bcz she want manik money n now someone else is honour of his property
Ali:baby..its okk...jo hua usse hum badal nhi skte bt hum use ladki ko bhagha skte h
Man:kya mtlb..
Alia:i mean tum usse torture karo n vo khud hi tumhe chodh degi
Man:r u sure
Ali:hm.....u know na i love you so i understand
She hug manik
Alia in mind:u gawar...tumne sb kharab kr diya tum kbhi bi malhotras empire ki honour nhi bnogi vo surf mera h sirf mera...
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Manik cme in mansion back n saw nandini n dadi laughing
Man:dadi.. wat z dis
Dadi:dekh putar jo hua so hua ab nandini teri biwi h or tujh yh manna hoga
Man:no way dadi yh meri wife kbhi nhi bnegi
Manik left from dere...
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As like dis manik hate nandini bt nandini didnt say anythg
They stay in same room bt manik sleep on bed n nandini on couch...
He torture her bt smewhere he feels bad
Nandini never leave her responsbility towards manik she used to take care of him...
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After 1 month
Manik go back home n suddenly some goans stop his car n they kidnap manik
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In an empty frame house
Manik tie with ropes n sit on chair
His faces bcme pale n wounds also dere on his face...
Otherside nandini bcme restless ki kuch hua h
She call manik office bt they said manik leave office early today
Yess in 1 month nandini learn hw to use ph.n many other thgs
Nan:manik ji kaha h aap kahi aapko kuch hua toh ni
Otherside manik z unconcious..
Nandini z very worried for manik so she left d mansion for finding him..
She go office bt no use so she go police station n file manik missing case
Police strt his investigation n soon manik car location traced
Nan:inspector sahab hum jayge waha pehle fir aap ana
Police:pr mam its not save
Nan:nhi..agar unnone manik ji ko kuch kr diya toh hum bi maar jayge
Police:okk mam we all r behind u
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Frame house
A girl come to meet manik
Girl:awww baby tumhe chot lgi h ooo
Manik bcme shck to see dat girl
Man:Alia tum
Ali:yes me....
Man:toh tum ho jisne mujh kidnap kiya h
Ali:yes baby..
Man:pr kyu
Alia hold his mouth tightly
Ali:bcz....u fool strt loving dat gawar u spend tym with her maine itna hardwrk krke tumhe fasaya n u strt loving her
Man:wat do u mean fasaya..u love me na alia
Alia laugh
Ali:love.....dis z ur big mistake baby...i dont love you ..i love ur money only sirf tumare paiso k liye thi m tumare sth bt wat u did shadi kr uss gawar toh ab tumhe marna hoga okkk bcz agar tum mere nhi toh kissi k nhi...
She point gun point towards manik head
Manik z all blank he close his eyes n remember dat moments which he spend with nandini
When she take care of him wen he bcme ill
She used to cook for him
She was d one who cares him more than her
Yes manik strt loving nandini..
Meantym a rod hit alia hand n gun falls down
Alia look who did dis n shocked
Yes nandini hit her hand
Manik saw her n bcme so happy dat nandini again cme to save him
Alia:catch her
Goans strt to catch her bt nandini rescue herself
Meantym police cme n strt hitting d goans n nandini safely untie manik hand
Nandini's back is facing n a goan cme with rod manik look him n hold dat rod which he was hit nandini
Nandini z standing quitely n manik strt fighting
Meantym alia pick d gun shot manik
But
But
Nandini come in middle n goli hit her stomach
Manik bcme shck his world stop
He z blank
Man:Nandiniiiiiiiiiiiiii
Police arrest alia n manik go hospitsl with nandini
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Hospital
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Doctors operate nandini n manik z crying only
Dadi cme in hospital
Dadi:manik
Man:dadi nandini
Dadi:tu ro na putar bahu thik ho jaygi
Manik stand up n go near ganesh statue n pray for nandini
After 18 hours
Doctor cme n said nandini z okk now
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After 2 weeks
Nandini cme bck home n manik take care of her properly
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All r present in hall
A man z siting with dadi n manan come down
M:dadi ji i think ab hume manik ko sach bta dena chahiye
Dadi:hmmm
Man:kaisa sach dadi
Dadi:manik....nandini koi gawar nhi h or na hi koi poor family ya village se h
Man:kya mtlb
Man stand up n cme near nandini n stand near nandini
M:truth is dat manik ki nandini is my daught Mr Raj Singhania daughter n she z london return
A bomb falls on manik
Nandini stand silently
Dadi:ha..or aaj yh natak khatam hota h
Man:kaisa natak
M:natak tumari or nandini ki shadi ka dadi ji chahti thi ki tumhe alia ka truth pta chale isliye tumari shadi nandini se hui thi ab u know everythg so nandini mere sth ja rhi h
Again a bomb falls on manik
Raj:accha dadi ji chalta hu
Nandini cme n touch dadi feet
Dadi gve her blessings
Manik z standing silently n registor all thgs happen wid him
Nandini strt going with his dad
Manik only saw her going his guilt not stop nandini
Nan in mind:plz rok lo meko manik plzz
But no he saw her going only n a loan tears cme from his eyes
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1 week left
Manan r restless they r missing each other like hell
They both used each other presence badly..
Its night tym
Nandini z sitting in her room wearing shorts n crop top she still wear mangalsutra n still fill her headline with sindoor she z thinking of manik
Suddenly some one cme in her balcony n she bcme scared
Nan:kon h
No reply
Meantym
A boy come in her room n nandini bcme shck
Nan:Manik
Yes manik cme in her room
In whole room manik pics r hang
Manik saw n bcme amaze n den saw nandini
Both r in pain
Dere eyes meet n tears cme out
Manik cme near her n hold her by shoulder
Man:nandini...i m sry plzz mujh maaf kr do jo bi maine kiya tumare sth..m...
He stop n strt crying
Man:i know u hate me bt still i wanna say I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU SO MUCH pta nhi kb pr yess i fall in love with u 1 week mujh pta chla ki hw much i love you n care for u i addicted of you u bcme my drug nandini plz foregive plzzz
He join his hands
Nandini also crying n happy too dat manik also love her
Nandini hold his hands n look in his eyes...
Nan:sshhhh......bs chup ho jao..
Man:i m sry nandini
Nan:I LOVE YOU TOO MANIK
Sats its manik he stop crying n look at her
Man:wat u just said..
Nan:I LOVE YOU TOO
Manik bcme happy n hug her
Nandini brk d hug n join her forehead wid him
Nan:manik..plz love me...
Manik saw her n saw desires in her eyes
Manik pick her in his arms n ly her on bed
Manik z over her n saw her wid full desirefull eyes
Manik strt kissing on eyes n nandini encircle her hand around his neck
Manik come down n strt kissing her neck n shoulder
Meantym he slide down her strip of top n inner
Manik kiss her madly seems like he was craving for only her
Nandini also enjoy his touch
Soon both clothes r on floor
Nandini z over manik n manik feel d pleasure
Soon manik flip d position n entwined dere hand n move inside her
She feel pain but after somtyn it converts into pleasure
Man:ahhh..hmmmm
Nan:oohhh...manik..ahhhhhemmm
Lights r off moon light enhance dere love making n dere love
Soon manan tke 2 3 rounds more n bcme ONE SOUL
Manik beside nandini n nandini head on his chest
Manik playing with her hands n other hand wrap around her tightly
Man:nandini
Nan:hmmm
Man:y so many pics of me hang in ur room
Nandini smile..
Nan:bcz i love you from dat day when i saw ur pic in ur house
Man:my house?
Nan:hmm dadi call me n discuss abt plan
Man:oo..so u love me from dat day only
Nan:yess....bcz dat day first tym i feel smthg new after look at ur pic n dat was love for u ...i love you manik
Manik kiss on her forehead
Man:I LOVE YOU TOO
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That night TWO UNCOMPLETED SOULS BECOME ONE COMPLETED SOUL
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