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"Hey max!" Pinkie pie said with a cheerful smile. "Hey pinkie" i said with a frown of my face, " i heard that twilight is going to have a challenging competticion about a treasure, legend says that the treasure is hiden on the water spring dark weather. I don't know what it means but do you want to join?" Said pinkie. My face turns with a flawless smile amd said "yes". " uh, please pinkie! That legend thingy is a fake! There is no treasure!" Said sunset shimmer. " pinkie shouted at sunset " sunset shimmer! Nothing is s fake! When you believe it, it'll be real!" Then i walk back slowly and bumps to queen elsa " uh! Sorry queen elsa! I didn't see you there!" I said shyly. "It's alright max, could you help me find the mane six?" Said queen elsa. "They're on canterlot but pinkie can't go to the canterlot because she's bored of canterlot." Said sunset shimmer terrible goodness! Queen elsa freaked out and goes worried and pinkie pie looks curious " is something wrong?" Said pinkie. "If 6 ponies don't showd up and give a half of their powers, winter season is 100% GONE!" Shout queen elsa. Me, pinkie pie, and sunset shimmer looks surprised and gets worried too. "I need their powers to make a thousands of snowflakes! What have i done?!" Said queen elsa almost cried. "Can we help you?" Said sunset shimmer looks sad, and queen elsa have a great idea. " can you, max, and pinkie pie help me to make snowflakes? We meed 3 ponies left but can you help me?" Ask queen elsa. " if this is about winter, i'm IN! " shouts pinkie pie.

" a what now? " said tardis, a tardis pony who is very close to pinkie pie. " yea, we need your help!" I said with a please face. " but wait just a minute, how on celestia y'all know?" Asked tardis. "Queen elsa said it" said pinkie pie. Tardis didn't respond for like 5 seconds and freaked out "queen elsa?! That ice queen?! I'm in! I wanna meet her so much!" Said tardis excited. Then sunset shimmer and pinkie pie brohoof and i was just standing with a smile. "Next is starlight..." Sunset shimmer said and knovks the door. " yes?" A mare with a flawless smile answers the door. It was starlight. "Hey starlight, can you do me a favor?" Said sunset. And starlight nod. "can you help us?" Ask sunset, then sunset tells what's going on and starlight surprised and nod "of course! I want to save the winter!" Said starlight with a smile. But we still need 1 more pony to be six ponies. This is my time to asked a pony. "Hey steel, queen elsa tells me that..." I tells everything about the winter and steel looks confused. "What in the hay? Winter will emd? No way! I am not falling of your pranks max!" Said steel with a loud voice. Then starlight said "this is real steel! We need your help!" With a puppy eyes but it keeps saying it again

"No"

"Please??"

"No"

"C'mon steel!"

"Fine!"

Finally steel said yes. We are now six ponies. In the trip we meet archimendes, the bad pony who always on ponies way. "What are you chumps doing? Hidding?" Said archimendes. "Not your business" said steel, archimendes got mad and said " not my business? Why you little!!" Before he continues melly stops him. "C'mon archimendes! Leave them alone!" Said melly. The unicorn mare who is talented in singing. "Fine! I haven't finish with you steel!" Said archimendes and left. "Sorry, my cousin is such a bully" said melly and waves her hand " bye guys! " melly said and left. After like 20 minutes we finally found queen elsa's castle, it is full of ice. When we open the door we all got surprised "WHAT?!!"

-To be continued on chapter 2-

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⏰ Last updated: May 07, 2014 ⏰

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