So this is one of the poems I wrote in writing class I think it's good but idk what u guys think
————————————————The rhythm lingered
From the voice that played backward
In the darkness of night
I saw a lightThe rhythm lingered
With butterfingers
I drop the candle wick
That was on a candlestickWalking down to ground
The darkness only spread
Until i was lead
The rhythm lingered all aroundFor the song of death will come with the bloodhound
The rhythm lingered