fallen Under

broken window

Authors note ] this is probably for people who can handle violence so I would  advise this to people +10 at least  and with out

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Claire's    p.o.v

I walked outside to drive my five year old son to his first day of kindergarten, I had him wait in the car for about two minutes while I grabbed my purse and locked my house . I started out for my car but I was in such a hurry to get to work that I didn't even notice the broken window and slight traces of blood on the seat.

I screamed a the top of my lungs when I noticed my son laying on the ground motionless. I ran out of my car as fast as I could in hopes to save him .

I crouched down on my knees and with out hesitation called the cops. "Hello 911 operator what is your emergency" I wasn't short to speak I needed who ever was responsible to be caught as soon as possible " MY SON PLEASE HE-"my eyes fell on a piece of paper covered in blood ,and it wasn't hard to read because of the bold letters

Your next ,  I dropped the phone when I felt a hand clamp around my mouth.

marks p.o.v

I got what I wanted, Claire and her son, the two people that ruined my life l didn't even like her ,much less her spoiled brat of a son . I only married her for her money , but the day had come ,I had man up and got what I wanted and it felt good. I took the knife out of her chest and and laid her down to continue stabbing her right after I broke the phone in two .

[On a boat in Atlanta]

I hooked chains to to my son and wife hopefully they go to Hell together. I hardly grabbed there hands and tossed them in to the ocean and watched them sink with satisfaction.

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Ok I know that this is a short chapter so I'm just going to ask

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Needs more violence

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