Frustration

Part title

You should never start a book with your mornings routine, specially when you will write all the booring things that honestly nobody cares about. I don't care what shampoo the hero of your book uses, I don't care how the water feels on her or his boody, or if he or she excuse the expression,poo or pee in the morning, how her mom or dad make her pancakes etc. This are an enormous amount of time waisted for me, I lose interest right away. If you really want to start the book with your morning routine then by all means say something like " After my morning routine " period, no more pages about it, because at the beginning of a book when I know nothing about the hero I simply don't care. It's like me telling you guys about a person only I know their morning routine in details.Also the silliness of many characters drives me insine and I will explain why.
The hero of the book was abused as it seems it's a trend this days , but despise all that she acts like a spoiled ,retarded brat that simply pisses me of and of course stop reading that book. You guys should seriously read some about abuse if you want to write about it.
An other annoying thing about books for me are the incredible short chapters, like 5 pages of my iPhone screen is called a chapter when in fact is not even half of a real page book, not to mention that two pages were the author note. Like seriously I will never vote for such a chapter no matter how good was written and if I were your fan and wait a week or more for an update and you give me that ,I will also never bother reading any of your books. It's incredible disrespectful for us readers and also for the other writers that actually write real chapters. And although I understand the fight for voters I only can agree with fairness in this matter.
Typos mistakes are common and I don't complain much about it since even I make them at times but when the same mistake continues repeatedly in the book is no more a typo mistake. I realize many of you can't write or understand the English grammar. Like most of the common mistakes are: last instead of lust(God I hate this word) .
1.Lust sounds so dirty so when a guy is about to rape (eye raping or not)a girl then by all means use it. But when a girl is about to make love with her bf,husband or mate use the word desire it's sweeter more melodic and poetic which in this case should be used.
2. Accept instead of except or the other way around.
3. Affect versus effect and the list goes on. I'm not gonna write them all. Don't wanna waist annyones time either.
The most common subject that annoys me to no ends is and I quote " The whole pack abused her ever since her mom died when she was five ,they blame her for it and used her as a punching bag and slave". Seriously as far as I know a pack has around 200 people more or less. Nevertheless are a lot of people, so how come all are psychopaths and child abuse is their law lol. Simply retarded no offence, not to mention that more then 50% of werewolf books use this same reason.
An other disturbing fact is all mates in werewolves books , well most of them, are about abuse , and the abuse come from their said mate, the one supposed to love them. And as if this was not enough they forgive all the pain and abuse in the end, because it was fate, ridiculous if you ask me. Most of you people who write nonsense about abuse know nothing about it, read nothing about it either. So research is required before you write about something you don't know anything about. ABUSE was, is or never will be love. I start to think that there is something really wrong with this generation and the way they see things. And before you complain about me reading certain books about abuse, let me tell you , you can find good books there in my "twisted " reading list about this subject. Want to learn a thing or two about it read those books, like "Grey's tribute". The book is about a cruel world and a certain amount of abuse to show domination.
An other thing that really is quite idiotic in my opinion are the different points of view. And yes I will explain why. Well first of all you start to write the story from your point of view, then you jump to your boyfriend,mate etc. point of view. You are the story teller therefore you have no idea what the guy thinks. You cannot possibly know. You want to say things from his point of view as well, then write this way "while she was looking at him like that , he felt like slapping her" this way you already typed from both their points of view, I hope I explain good enough, since English is not my first language I have at times a hard time making my point .
An other Thing that no matter how many times I'm gonna read about I still can't agree on are the wolfs inside the human. Completely stupid. A werewolve is a human with the ability of changing his body into one of a wolf, he does not have double personalities, his wolf is part of him not a different conscious , a wolf can't talk any human language either which is stupid to mention in the first place. A werewolve is a single person, not two. It's like saing I was born with three hands instead of two and because of it I can talk and communicate with it. I honestly don't know who came up with this in the first place but it makes no freaking sense . But if you really want to write about a talking wolf inside a person at least explain how that is possible. Like in Naruto he has a spirit fox inside of him, was talking and had a different personality but was not a part of him they used his body as a prison for the fox. So you see when you come up with something like this explain how is it possible.
As I will continue reading and discover or remember other things that bothers me I will update an other chapter.