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As he was walking toward me, I closed my eyes. He came over and kicked me hard in the stomach. I felt something break. Then, he walked over to the corner of the building and got a 2 foot long metal pole. He was walking back and he looked me straight in the eyes. He took a full swing back and launched at my head. I moved my head to the right as he swung to the left. The next time he got me in the head. It was getting hard to open my eyes. I was getting dizzy. He hit me one last time but it hit my cheek bone. It felt like it smashed. I was pouring tears. I begged him to stop but then he punched me in the other cheek and I blacked out...

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