"Love" at first sight

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Ok so here's the first chapter/prologue/intro to my first Larry fic (well, not the first I write but the first I write in English and the first I post)

English is my second language and I've been teaching it for years but I'm human and I'm not used to write in English. And I have dyslexia so I might fuck up without realising it (also I don't have a beta). So if you see something wrong, please let me know.

(I'm not sure about the title...)




Characters:

Louis: Slytherin, 6 year. Sassy af but with a good heart. Swears a lot. Protective with his friends. A bit childish sometimes. Lazy (thanks Merlin for the elves). Studies the day before but has good marks because he's smart. He's not tiny, ok? (And if someone says otherwise, he'll curse them). Has a crush on Harry but thinks it's not mutual. Fav subject: Defense against the Dark Arts and Muggle Studies. Pureblood.

Zayn: Slytherin, 6 year. Louis' bff. Quiet, mysterious. Prefers to watch everything and everyone and doesn't talk that much. He loves to draw. Has a crush on Liam but is too shy to talk to him. Fav subject: Astronomy and Transfiguration. Pureblood.

Harry: Gryffindor, 5 year. Always kind with everyone, loves to help others. Clumsy af. Cutest guy ever. Everyone loves him. His room/bed are always the most tidy. Makes awful jokes. Likes Louis but is too oblivious to realise Louis has feelings for him. Fav subject: Potions and Adivination. Half blood

Niall: Hufflepuff, 5 year. Loves food more than people. Is always smiling and cuddles everyone. A bit hyperactive, can be annoying. Insecure about his abilities. Muggleborn. Fav subject: Charms and Muggle Studies

Liam: Ravenclaw, 6 year. Harry's bff but he acts more like his dad. Seems serious but knows how to get fun. Cares a lot about things that are not that important. Great mind, enjoys to study and discover new things every day. Fav subjects: Care of Magical Creatures and Herbology. Half blood.


 Harry POV

I open my eyes and check my watch: fuck, I'm late for breakfast! It's Monday and I'm tired because I went to sleep late last night, I was doing my homework.

I go to the loo, put on my uniform and take my bag before leaving my Common Room. When I enter the Great Hall I feel like something is wrong. I check myself and then notice it: I forgot to change from my pyjama bottoms to my uniform pants! Why am I so stupid and clumsy? And as if that wasn't embarrasing enough, I can feel someone's gaze in me. I look around and see the bluest eyes I've ever seen and the most beautiful smile someone could have. Next thing I realise is that I'm next to the Slytherin table and the boy looking at me with that warm smile is one of them. But he doesn't seem to be the mean type and his eyes and his smile let me speechless. Merlin, I think I have a crush.

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Louis POV

It's Monday and I'm in the Great Hall having breakfast before my first class, Defense Against the Dark Arts. Zayn, my best friend, is talking about Liam, his crush, when I see my crush approaching to our table. His name is Harry Styles, he's a Gryffindor and I've been in love with him for almost a year now. It started as an innocent crush, but my feeling for him grew up every time I learned something new about him. It isn't as if I stalk him or something like that, oh no -ok, maybe a bit- . It's just that he was well-known in the school. Everybody loves him, he's the kindest and sweetest boy I've ever met. And his chocolate curls look so soft, his green eyes are so big and beautiful, and his pink lips look so kissable. I know he will never notice me, but I have something in mind. I'm a Slytherin after all, you know?

I can see Harry coming closer to where I'm sitting but he suddenly stops walking and I notice what happens: he's wearing his pyjama pants! And they're so cute, baby blue with puppies in them. The poor boy is bright red in seconds and I can't help but smile at that image, he looks so soft with his messy bed hair and his puppies pyjama. And then he looks at me and catch me staring at him. I blink and take my attention back to Zayn, who is now talking about Liam lips look so soft, mate. I wanna kiss him so bad or something like that. To be honest I don't give a fuck about Liam. Even if he's Harry's best friend. But wait, maybe I should? 



Let me know what you think about it? I know it isn't the big thing but it's just an intro. Chapters won't be long anyway.

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