Author: IreneOnabia Genre: Vampire Target Readers: 15+ up
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It is nice to be back. Welcome to our critique war – choss. 😝 Are you ready? Oh, wait... Am I ready? 😂
Okay let's get started, the outcast. Personally, my first impression to the title is something drama. 😊 Pero nang mapansin ko ang genre, naging given agad lahat ng idea. I am not actually fond of vampires story, hindi ako fan ni Edward pero I search them through google because of curiosity. Mayroon din akong book niyan, bigay lang pero hindi ko binasa. Hindi ko alam sa sarili ko kung bakit. Even, harry potter didn't give me an interest kahit pa best seller siya.
So, why am I saying this? Simply, I don't like Vampire/witch thingy stories. On my rare days when I get tired of reading romance I hit search bar on the wattpad flat form and randomly clicked stories, yung mga genre na ni minsan hindi ko binasa. Believe it or not, I found your story. I didn't read the novel but I stalked the blurb, something on it makes me curious. The word PARIAH, what's the meaning of that?
At ang daming hashtag, ano po iyan award of the novel? Don't mind this portion, 😂 monologue si dcmuch. Namiss ko kasing mag-critique. 😆
Nakita ang kamote ni Charmdiatz, okay, seryoso na.
Plot: Initially, I don't expect that much. Vampires are automatically bloodsucker, what is new with them? The story of the outcast had this kind of unique plot for me. The protagonist is a real vampire and she turned out to be a killer of her race. (Nod. Nod.) This is cool and complicated. I am starting to list my expectation. About the involvement of the wolves, doctors, chemical formula how Vernice turned into an incredibly slayer and how vampires power works. Ang dami palang nakapaloob sa book, akalain mo, hindi lang siya normal na vampire issue. 🤔
Dahil hindi pa nangangalahati ang story, I find this difficult on my part to say that the story is something like this and that. I will leave this category as of the moment, because the story is still on-going.
