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It had to be her [SavannaGeorgia123]

This story has about 30 chapters and I started to read it today. I read the first 13 chapters and for me it's typical cliche Twilight and Nightshade style. And I don't like Twilight. At all. But yeah... I won't condemn it immediately. To be honest, in first chapter my head started to spin, because there was so much information and names and I had a mess inside of my head. But I bit my cheek and kept on reading and to my surprise I started to like it. Really.

Just when you do dots, do only three. It's more clear and stylistically correct. And when you write direct speech, do not space before the quotation marks. It will look better.

Big positive is your rich vocabulary and the fact that you know where you're going with the story. And I can see that you really love writing it and you don't take it lightly.

Next thing that I don't like is that you're saying too much about next chapter in A/Ns. I don't think that you need to do that. And I never like when author talks about himself/herself in A/N, but you're not the only one who does that. You just got unlucky that you're the first.

And the cover... It's not bad. I've seen worse and it's probably made by you which is appreciated

final summary: Although I did not like it at the beginning, I found out that I can read it without frequent eye rolling and hopeless sighing.

OVERALL RATING: 3 = It's good! Even when we're sure that you can do it better :)

And you also have a small plus for your passion for writing! ♥

- BECCA