The horrer under the ocean

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(ok most of this i got from the game of bioshock....if you dont know of the game look it up on youtube...oh and i do not own bioshock ownershipe goes to the people that made it also this is my FIRST story so sorry if it sucks) (i thank Another Nerd for helping me with the name of the main character)

My name is Max Wellington and this is my story of the horrer that is the city underwater..the city of Rapture.

It was an average day it started normaly i got up at 9 in the morning took a shower and ate brekfast while watching tv. I usualy get in a little nap befor work but today i was wide awake and it sureprized me becuase im always tired around that time. Ignoreing the fact that i was doing something i never do i continued to watch tv untill i got a phone call. I anserd my phone expecting it to be my friend telling me that he was bored or something but on the other side was just the sound of shalow breathing. In responce to the creepy sound i answerd with the usualy "who is this" thinking i would get a reply but the caller said nothing and just continued to breath into the phone. I sat there for a few minutes waiting for them to replay and right as i went to hang up they answerd with "meet me at the pier at 2:00 in the morning or your friends and family will die". After that they hung up. I thought it was just a couple of teenagers playing a prank on my but something bothered me but i couldnt put my finger on it...if it was teenagers they why where they so calm when saying that? Why didnt i hear laughter when i was waiting for a reply? Just thinking about it made me do what something i would never so....i was gunna go and see what that call was about....no one thretens my family like that!

*8 hours later* I got home from work tired as usual. Walking past my house phone i saw that i had a message and with me being curious i had to see who it was from and what it was about. I pressed the play button and waited for the message to start and when it finnaly did it was a shock. *message starts*"i changed the time meet me at the pier at midnight or else your family will die and i will hunt you down and slowly torchur you" *message ends* I stood there in shock wondering how they had the nerve to call me again and say THAT to me.....well now i had to go becuase he also brought me into what would happen if i didnt. I looked at the clock i had  on the wall " five o'clock i have time to get ready and....maybe a little nap also" i was to tired to get ready for anything befor my after work nap so i took it and when i woke up it was ten it night. "T-ten?!" "I slept for five hours and noei have to get ready and go to the peir befor midnight.....*sigh* well this is just great!" when i was finaly ready it was eleven o five so i had to run to my car and drive like a mad man to get to the peir in time. The pier was a good 45 minute drive from where i lived so i had to make sure i drove fast but not fast enough to where my time would get wasted by cops becuase i was speeding.

When i finnaly got at the pier it was eleven fifty so i was ten mintes early and for me that was a good thing. The next thing i knew i got hit in the head with a very blunt object andi hit the ground out cold...

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⏰ Last updated: Jun 29, 2012 ⏰

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