my short story's

back to the past

OK I don't know how old I was when I wrote this story and I think it was in 6th grade. It was an assignment but its cute so I decided to publish it, the grammar n stuff is a little off but that was because I didn't know what I was doing. Hope you enjoy. Tell me what you think.

back to the past

once upon a time there was a really big town more of a city then a town if you ask me and everything was plastic or robot even the cars were robot and the city like town had an invisible force field around it the planet was a dark scary place except for in the force field it was light and sunny and always daytime and the houses touched the sky and were made of steel and metal and there was no sand because it was made in to glass for windows there was no gardens no fresh air (like in the lorax) and there were scientists working on time machines and the winner got a big reward one scientist was having a lunch break and his little twins sneaked in and beeped buttons and the time machine diapered there dad went crazy because his son and daughter went poof they were about 7 years old so they were fine and they hiked around and found a town and they wondered what happened to their town and the force field was not up yet and there was no dark creepy wall on the outside and so they went and spread the word soon everyone went to gardening and nya and kai the twins went hiking and sowa a cave they peeked in and sowa a mad man not like a caveman like a scientist and he was plotting against their father and his friends because all their science projects were a big success and his never were and nya ran in and red the machine and it sed dark and creepy and she knew what that meant kai ran in after her and they both hid between a crack in the cave and soon the mad scientist returned and i am going to destroy the city now right after i take a nap and soon fell asleep kai ran in and grct the red string out and nya said no no it's the blue sting so kai pold all of them out and sat a bucket out to crack the rain because they remembered when they were 2 years old it rained like never before soon the bucket was full and it was getting quite cold so they got a blanket and laid it on the mad scientist and sed sweet dreams and nya gave him a good night kiss kai said with disgust and steel pouring the water on the machine "eww that's disgusting and please never do that to me wait a scent you did do it to me!" nya said "please do not be mad at me i just need some practise" and kai sed "wat for" nya sed "to be a good mom!" kai sed "ya but you aren't even a teenager yet!" and nya sed "shh shh shhh be quiet and thats a very good point now hurry up lets go back up the mountain and in the muchin dad is building" kai ran out and poshed more buttons and nya sed "stop let's at least try to read these buttons" kai sed "don't care lets just go" and soon they found themselves back in there one time and the whole earth was bright and sunny again and there mom and dad was so happy to see them again and there dad videos the hole thing happened the forcefield disappeared and plants came back to life and rell air and oxygen came back to the planet earth

and the earth lived and is still living happily ever after the end 

I know most of the words are spelt wrong but that's OK, a little kid wrote it a couple years ago and it was me that's all. And besides I steel do that sometimes haha