Good vs. Not So Good

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Prologue

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Hey guys. This is my first story, so I'm sorry if there's any mistakes. Please comment on what you think! I hope you enjoy. ;)

No-ones POV, August 12, 2056

It was just a normal day on a normal street when a normal girl took a trip to her best friend's house. That day changed everything. She rang the door bell and waited, but unlike normal he didn't answer. Alyssa McCormick stood there waiting and rang the door bell again. She twirled her long blonde hair around her finger. Still no answer. Just then Lucas's neighbour came around from the back of her house. " Oh hello deary, I'm afraid if you are looking for the Dobins, your out of luck. They moved out yesterday." she said kindly.

" I'm sorry you must be mistaken. Lucas Dobins would never move out and not tell me. it's just not what best friends do. He's probably just out for the day. "

" Look I don't know what you're on about. they moved out yesterday. I should know. I helped them move their stuff. Apparently it had something to do with the war."

The war between the pink and blacks had been going on for years. No-one knows how it started, but here's a quick briefing of it

It all began a long long time ago as all interesting wars do. It was in a time when mythical creatures weren't myths and all kinds of monsters roamed the planet. Humans had only just began to exist. The humans who did exist were just as mean and snooty as they are today. They all wanted to have the best creatures as their pets. The wealthy and rich families had the most magical pet of all. The unicorn. (a/n I know this might sound really childish, but the storyline will progress) One day a fight broke out between the two most powerful families. They each thought they had the best unicorn. One family's unicorn was pink and the others was black. they had a huge row about who had the best unicorn. All the other families had to decide which side they were on. Soon it became a battle. Then it became a war. This battle was older than time, older than dirt, but it still raged on. The pink unicorns were full of goodness and well being. The black unicorns were full of evil and hatred. Both wanted to win the war just for the sake of old times. (This tale has been told so many times I'm sure the way I just told it to you wasn't exactly perfect, but never mind that.)

"I don't believe you. I will never believe you. He would not just leave. The war hasn't taken him away too. It just hasn't." She burst into tears

The war had just taken her dad in battle. They were on the side of the pinks. So was Lucas. No-one knew how he had died, but he had. A troupe of soldiers found him lying in the middle of a forest. He looked like he was sleeping, but when they tried to rouse him, he just lay there. They felt no heart beat, and sent us a note. As he was all the way in a foreign country, they couldn't bring him back. He is in a place of honor out in the wilderness.

Still crying, she ran back home. " Mum, mum, please don't say it's true. He couldn't have moved away. He hasn't moved away..... Has he?"

"Has who moved away?"

" Lucas! Lucas Dobins!"

" Oh yes Lucas.......Oh yes I think he moved away yesterday. Why?"

Parents are so ignorant.

" Why. WHY?! BECAUSE HE IS MY BEST FRIEND! THAT'S WHY!"

" Well there's no reason to yell. Hmmm let me just see for a second. Oh yes he did give me a letter to give to you. Such a nice lad. Very handsome." she waggled her eyebrows suggestively.

" Uggh mum we're just friends. Stop digging into my personal life. Geez."

She handed her the letter.

" Mum, that says give to Ally immediately! WHY DIDN'T YOU DO THAT?!"

" Oh, I guess I must have forgotten. sorry dear."

"Ugh. I give up."

She ran up to her room and tore open the letter. It read;

Dear ally

I'm so sorry we couldn't say goodbye personally. My mum made me move instantly. I'm not surprised to be honest. My mum told me some, shocking, news. We have moved to a deserted island. I think the name is Isola. Try looking it up on the map. I don't think you'll find it though. If you don't find it, here are the directions now.

Take a direct flight to Peru. Once you get there, there should be a dock. Go up to the creepiest guy with the junk he calls a boat. Tell him you are on the blacks side. The secret password is BLACKS3489. If you have to write it down, use all caps. He will then take you in his boat to a secret dock. Then a properly qualified sailer will take you to Isola. Please come . I bet I'm the only kid on this stupid island. I'm allowed to text you and a few other people, but that's really it. I miss you already :( I hope I see you soon!

Your best friend in the whole wide world,

Lucas ;)

Ally's POV.

when am I ever gonna have enough money to go to Peru?! Urrrggghhh. NEVER.

Ok so I don't know if this is long enough or what, but this chapter/prologue is unedited. please comment if you like it or if you don't. Thx, byeeeeeeeeee

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