Hi so this is my first actual book so please only constructive criticism, ok?
Key: italics are for thoughts of a character - - bold is for authors notes - -
First I'll set the scene
Mia lives in Sunnyside, a perfect lakeside suburb about an hour from New York where the crime rate is so low the police are only part time... perfect girl perfect world
Jack lived in a rocky part of New York and is described as 'in the know' by many. He is moving to Sunnyside to get away from his parents who are overbearing yet always busy...bad boy with a bad past
Any comments you have would be amazing and feel free to ask for any plot changes I'm open to suggestions.
I created Jack and Mia and all other characters in this book so please do not plagiarise (use your own ideas I know it's hard but life sucks so...)
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RomanceMia Angel is a small town girl with a voice you can help but love Jack Levere is a big city boy who knows everybody you need to know They are both completely happy with their lives until they meet. When the realise there has always been something or...
