The following is a review by the wonderful tommotopia in her book “Book Reviews” (which as of the 15th June has around 26,700+ reads so she knows what she’s talking about :D) The gif on the side is how she feels about my little story >>>
Rating: 8.5
Thoughts: I have to say, I am absolutely in love with your writing style, You know how to perfectly capture a moment with extravagant sensory description and imagery. The originality was great too – and I didn’t really catch any grammar or spelling errors, which means you did a great job with proofreading your work, a common thing forgotten by many authors, (including me). I can’t say much else, because it’s a short story, but fabulous job!
Recommend: Heck yeah! How could I not? An undiscovered gem that deserves much more reads and votes and comments!
*check out the gif*
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Thє ℒαst Eɳтry (A Short Story) [PRIZE WINNING & PUBLISHED]
Short StoryI was lost in that moment of time. In her eyes, I saw Alice's twinkling eyes. In her smile, I saw Alice's captivating smile. In her glowing cheeks, I saw Alice's flawless ivory skin. I know I mustn't think about Alice anymore but fond memories a...
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