MY FIRST POEM ON WATTY!!!! It's a little short but it's one of my favorites. I'm open to criticism, let me know how to improve my writing! Thanks :)
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Is there really paradise?
Or is it just a myth?
A tale to make you believe there's somewhere better than where you are
Or something more than what you have
I mean everything has a flaw
Maybe you are in paradise but you can't enjoy it
Because you don't have something, or someone to enjoy it with.
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Please comment!
It's been edited one of the lines is credited to @foreverhidion3 thanks for that! :D
