So this first poem was the VERY FIRST poem I've wrote. I wrote this about 1 year ago and this poem was about my relationship with my ex. I don't think it was THAT good but tell me your opinion about this poem.
You aren't the love of my life anymore
I don't love you for what you did
You lied to me
All the lies you left behind.
The lies doesn't effect you at all
If you knew what I felt
You should've knew when to stop
The lies
All the lies you told me
I believed you
I believed all the lies.
I know I shouldn't have
But you sounded so sincere
You sounded so sorry
I should never have believed all the lies
I should have seen what was going on
I should've seen you with her
I should have seen the things that pointes in that direction.
Now look at what all the lies did
All the lies
Made you loose everything
Everything that was so important to you
You've lost everything
Thank you
Thanks to all the lies
The lies
That's what you should have regretted
Not me
Blame all the lies
All the lies got you into this mess.
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So there it is. Tell me what you think.
