fact is i love u

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after neil went from sukoon house along with mogli avni heart break down into pieces and she falls unconscious on the floor

sunheri: avni , avni plse get up

she runs to kitchen and brings some water and spills some water on avnis face but she does not gain conscious , and all the children over there were getting tensed

sunheri : what should i do now? should i call neil? no , no i will not call him , because of him avni is in this position

she immediately calls dd and asks him for help and he comes to help his babhi

dd takes avni to hospital

dd: doctor how is she now?

doctor: she is not at all well ,she is in very critical condition now and it is all due to over stress

dd and sunheri gets shocked and sunheri starts crying

dd: dont worry sunheri nothing will happen to babhi

sunheri : no dd , nothing will be fine , how can she be fine when the only person she is alive for is also being snatched away from her

dd: what do u mean sunheri?

sunheri: yes dd neil filed a case against avni for moglis custody due to which she is in this state

dd: what how could neil sir do this to avni babhi , i will tell him

sunheri: no dd plse dont tell him anything , he had lost his brain many days back and now i dont want him to come here and taunt avni more

dd: sunheri plse stop it , i know neil sir is not doing good but if he sees avni abhi in this state he will surely melt and i know he is doing all this out of anger , i have seen him how much he loves avni babhi

sunheri: may be u r right but i too saw avni struggling in these 10 years dd , and only i know what avni is going through and plse if u care for ur babhi then dont call neil here

and she leaves from there

dd pov: no sunheri u r wrong i have to call neil sir , he can only make babhi alive , i know he is angry now but i know him very well he cannot see babhi in this state and he will surely forgive her

and dd calls neil

dd: sir i want to tell u about avni babhi that

neil : dd plse dont tell me about that lady , now i am fed up with her so plse dont tell me anything about her

dd: sir but once listen to me

neil : sry dd if u want to talk something else u can but not about avni

dd: but sir babhi

neil cuts the phone

dd: what should i do now? i will call prakash uncle , he might help me

dd calls prakash uncle

prakash: ha dd

dd: uncle avni babhi is in hospital and she is in critical

prakash : what?(he is shocked to the core and tears are running out his eyes)

everyone seeing prakash gets worried

prakash: ok i will come dd

bebe: prakash what happened?

prakash is very tensed and his eyes r filled with tears

neil: dad what happened? is everything fine ?

prakash: (he shouts)nothing is fine neil , it is only because of u , because of u avni is in this state , on hospital bed fighting for her life

to say neil was shocked would be understatement he is beyond shocked and his eyes are filled with tears and fear of losing his lifeline

all of them went to visit avni in the hospital

neil came running to avnis room and he found her unconscious on the bed , tears are flowing down from his eyes and he is not able to take his eyes off from avni , he is staring her and praying to god to keep her alive ,

neil pov: god plse dont take my avni away from me again , i cannot live without her , i know i did very wrong to her , i was very rude to her , but i am not able to see her in this condition and now i realize how much i love her and no one can take place of her in my heart , i only and only love her till my death ,i dont mind whether she will come back to me or not but i am not going to leave her anymore and i will always be her side , i dont know what made her leave me 10 years back and also i dont want to know it , all i know is i love her and i cannot live without her , god plse give me one chance , plse god protect my avni

after sometime avni gains conscious

dr: ms avni gained conscious and u people can meet her one by one

neil was about to go but sunheri stopped him

sunheri: neil plse u dont go , plse let her live , y dont u just leave her alone, what else do u want from her lifr she gave everything she has and now u took mogli too , now what else u want

neil : sunheri plse , i know i did mistake but plse , plse sunheri let me meet avni , and he cries

sunheri: no neil , if she sees u , she will get more stressed and i dont want to lose her , we all need her

neil: plse sunheri just for once i want my avni back and i promise i will never leave her alone

by hearing this everyone gets happy and sunheri allows neil to go inside

neil opens the door and sees avni crying , she doesnt see who entered the room and thinks it is sunheri

avni: sunheri plse i dont want to talk now plse leave me alone for sometime

neil: no avni i have to talk to u

avni gets shocked seeing neil

avni : neil? u here? what r u doing here? mogli is with u no? then what else do u want from me , i am sry neil i dont have anything else left except my life to give u

neil is in tears and he kneels down infront of avni

neil : i am sry avni , i am really sry for whatever i did , i was in angry and i did not know what made me take that decision , i am really sry avni , plse forgive me

avni : neil plse dont cry neil(avni being avni melts down by seeing neil crying)

neil : no avni i did a blunder by snatching mogli from u and getting engaged to mithali , i am sry for everything avni , and now i promise u i am never going to leave u alone , i love u avni , u r my lifeline and i cannot live without u , and now plse forget the past avni , and now i want to lead a happy family life with u and mogli by my side

avni : neil u know i am very angry at u, for taking mogli away and moving on in ur life , i know i only told u to move on in ur life , but i really didnt know that u will move on in just a day but neil the "fact is i love u" and cannot stay angry at u for so long, i love u more than my life and i will be doing that till end of my life

neil hugs avni and avni to hugs him back , he kisses all over the face and mumbles sry to her and she too says sry to neil

neil: shhh avni , now no more crying , and takesome rest now we have to go home tomorrow    


guys i just hope u people like it and yes i personally feel that there is no need of prakashs truth coming out infront of neil , if we really love someone there is no need of any truth and should forgive them for their doings after all love is about forgiving the one we love , i feel very happy even if the truth comes out , i just wrote my point of view and guys i will upload avneil: its all about destiny by tomorrow night and thanku for all ur love and support

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