Authors Note: I think if I update more, the more people will read so I'm goingnto cross my fingers! Oh and also the boys are single so don't attack me with "wrong info" I'm aware 3/5 are taken. And I couldn't think of anyone so I made up Tommo's ex :)
And this chapter might be a teensy weensy bit longer!
And also let me know what you're feeling in the comment section, I'd like to hear some thoughts :)
It was nearly nine when I had woken up to the tv. It was on life time, I must've fallen asleep while watching it last night. Looking through my phone I didn't see any messages besides from my best friend, Eman, desperately trying to get all the details out of me with the whole Louis incident. I don't even know how to quite explain it, he just came to me. Irritated by the commercials I shut off the magical box with the moving pictures and grabbed myself a towel hanging on my bathroom door and heating up the shower.
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I checked the time making sure I had enough time to get ready and I had about two hours and twenty-five minutes exactly to get ready. In my towel, I was standing hopelessly in front of my closet having no idea wot to wear. This was terrible!
KNOCK KNOCK
"Heeee-. Oh girl you are a big mess!" he surprised me ! It was Eman, "your mom let me in, I sent you like 21 messages and yes I counted, and I got worried after you wouldn't reply to the tenth one I sent you. Now I see why."
"Oops, sorry love. As you see I'm in a bit of a crisis, mind helping me?" he couldn't say no, plus he always complained about my wardrobe and knowing that I'll be with Lou he'll definitely find something appropriate. After all, I won him over giving him pity over my puppy dog eyes.
"Well you're going to a park so that rules out the trashy look," he tosses a striped blue mini dress and tosses it onto my bed, "Uhhh I swear (y/n) we need to go shopping more often!"
I couldn't help but laugh because I'll admit it, even he dressed better than me, that ho. He handed me a long sleeve designed with red stripes, the sleeves ended before meeting my elbows, it was cute. He then handed me a pair of white skinnies, and before I could say anything he scolded at me, "Do you want to look good or not? That's right so stick it lady." and we laughed and he laid on the bed with me.
"Thanks love this means a lot to me, and I have some cute sandals to wear with this, now let me get out of this towel." I excused myself from my room making an entrance to the bathroom. I took my phone with me texting Lou my address and he replied instantly. Once I was I dressed, it took me ten minutes to blow-dry my hair and Eman came from behind me.
"Need help doing your hair?" he grabbed the straightener before I could even answer, "I don't care I'm helping." It was nice having him help me, he even did my make up and everything.
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We were gossiping and the whole time I was talking to him about Lou he kept saying, "SHUT UP!?" "NO WAY?!" "OH.MAH.GOD" being redundant much and we got interrupted by my mum with a worried tone, "(y/n) Uhhhh come down stairs."
Eman and I exchanged puzzled looks, as we headed down stairs, there he was. Devin. Standing in front of the door with my favorite bouquet of flowers, and stood there smiling with begging eyes.
"I'll talk to you later honey, [whispers] call me later." and my best friend left me stranded with this jerk bag giving me a peck on the cheek and excusing himself from my mum and then disappeared.
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The bedroom door was locked and he made his way to my bed. He noticed the missing bears and the pile of ashes in the trash can, but of course he didn't say anything. He patted my blanket offering me a seat next to him. He began brushing cheeks and began brushing through my hair.
"I've missed you. Yesterday was a big mistake. I can't be without you. Forgive me?" he said looking at me and before I could get lost into his eyes he began kissing my neck. I was so vulnerable and I continued to let him slowly lift my shirt up and unhook my bra. Realizing wot he was doing I pushed him away.
"You think you can come in here and expect me to take you back with out giving me any reason for wot you did?! You left me there, ALONE! Do you have any respect by the way? My mum is down stairs and you're here undressing me?! I can't believe you!" my mascara started to smear as tears began to fall. I was dying for him to comfort me and explain his excuses he'd use for reasons. Not even that, he laughed and threw the flowers on the floor.
"I'm trying to be romantic and you question me? This isn't worth our relationship. Goodbye." and he escorted himself out the door.
Just like that. He left me. Again. I couldn't possibly pick myself up at this moment. I canceled on Lou and cried myself to sleep once more.
***Lou's POV***
I grabbed my coat and right when I headed out the door saying bye to my boys (y/n) calls. Wot a relief I wanted to hear her voice once more.
"Hello love I'm on way!" I was actually yelling with excitement until she cut me off.
"Sorry Lou I just can't make it today, maybe some other time." and before I could respond she hung up on me. The phone call made me extremely worried, after all she was only sobbing in my ear only two seconds ago.
I walked in to see Zayn passed out on the velvet love seat Harry chose out and placed on the side of the tv. Niall was in the dining room sitting on the table playing Scrabble with the rest of the gang. I could only imagine wot words were actually being spelled correctly. They asked me to join but instead I laid down and took a nap myself.
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"BOO BEAR WAKE UP!" Harry jumped on me and began slapping my cheeks. I could only make out his wild hair and the rest was a blur so I got up and rinsed my face.
"Well thanks mate for the wake up call, if you want my attention you have to play music and do a strip tease got it?" I gave him a little wink as he started playing music from his iPhone and began unbuttoning his shirt.
"Well look Lou, me and the boys are heading out to a club around the corner. Now I'm not asking you for permission so hurry up and get dressed." he messed up my hair and left me alone.
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"Shabbat Shalom, look at these gorgeous fine young ladies. Zayn why don't we go pounce on some of them?" Harry flipped his hair and lead the way. Them two were always getting the ladies, and I don't blame them, they were very good looking men.
"C'mon mates, there's a beautiful bartender and I'd like to buy us some drinks." Niall dragged me and Liam and had a couple drinks. The whole time Liam was lecturing the young lady about looking for a new job because men here could be so rude, a club wasn't the right place for innocent young ladies like herself. As always his charm won him her number.
I felt an arm caressing my body and suddenly I was being dragged into the dance floor. I was enjoying this lovely figure, wild curly blonde hair, a nice fitted sequenced dress with a pair of blue pumps, yes a bit odd for a lad to know about fashion but wot can I say? She turned around and once she did I recognized her face.
It was Sally, my ex.
Shoving her away politely I asked, " Wot do you think you're doing here Sally? You're intoxicated get away from me, we're over!"
She kept dancing on me and ignored everything I said, "Look beb I'm just trying to have a good time, plus you won't return any of my calls. How is this fair for me?" she kept going down on me and I felt awkward.
"Come on Sally let's go home, give me your bag." Liam was grabbing her arm, and I was mouthing the words, "Thank You" cos Sally was hard to get rid of. Liam told me to round up the guys and go back home.
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The next morning I woke up, although I felt someone's presence, I turned to see Sally lying naked next to me. She wasn't the only one in her birthday suit.
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It's Gotta Be Lou
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