So I went serching through my old unfinished writings. I thought I should post what I have to see if people liked them. If so then i would continue on them if not then I suppose I would dispose of them. This will just be one of many unfinished stories. I probably have at least 50 notebooks and it is taking up space. I would also like to not that a character i have in this story is one of my original characters and is in many of my stories.
Chapter 1
There was a planet on the edge of the milky way. No human knew of this planet because it was dangerous to go out in that direction. However one brave, rich, and daring human decided to take a chance. So he went and what he saw was a bright green planet that looked almost similar to Earth in shape in color.
When the human was about to turn around he noticed he was running low on fuel. So low in fact that this similar to Earth planet was the only place he could land. So he went to land his rocketon the planet. Not knowing what would happen or 'who' lived there.
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Ameel, a girl who lives on the planet, walked through the forest like environment. It was beautiful plants as colorful as rainbows. Wild animals that humans only ever saw in fairytails. They exsisted in a peaceful harmony. This was Ameel's and her brother Sai's (think of Sai from Naruto) job; keeping the peace and tranquility that exsisted on the planet.
Ameel froze when she heard the wild animals running and felt the ground trembling. She had no idea what was happening. When she heard she hadnt heard before she looked to the sky seeing some type of object falling from the sky. Quickly she ran off a ways and climbed into a tree. soon after getting settled into the tree the object crashed shaking the ground like a large earthquake.
Ameel perked up her wolf like ears to try and listen. She listened hearing a strange noise then something like foot steps. The foot steps sounded kind of similar to her own except louder. It wasn't quiet as loud as a papa dragon though.
Slowly the sound came closer and closer to Ameel. She froze going completly still, silencing her own breathing. Her eyes looked around for the source of the sound. When she saw what it was she was shocked. It looked like one of her people in some sort of strange suit.
Ameel jumped down and spoke in her native native tounge, "What are you wearing and what was that crash?" she asked.
The guy in front of her just starred at her. Ameel didn't know what was wrong with him but she figured it had something to do with the suit. So she grabbed the helmet and ripped it off. The she froze at the sight before her. Some guy who looked like her kind but without a type of animal ears.
"Eek! What happened? Oh mother of creatures why have you punished this man? What has this man done to loose his ears?" Ameel cried out in her native tounge.
Then a figure came running up behind Ameel. A boy who looked to be in his teens with pale skin, black hair, and black wolf ears and black wolf tail. He came up and a tight hold of Ameel.
"What is going on that could make you of all people shriek? Please tell me sister!" the boy said with the same native tounge as Ameel.
"This guy has lost his ears, Sai. His ears!" Ameel cried out.
Sai looked over at the guy who looked dumbfounded. Yet you could tell that the guy was curious about the two people standing before him as well as startled. So Sai let go of his sister and grabbed the man by his shoulders. The look on the mans face then became scared.
With a sigh Sai let go of the man. Yet an instant later he was punching the man in the stomach. Sai closed his eyes and watched the life the man had lived all the way up to the crash. With that Sai backed up and cleared his throat.
"Sorry about that.I didn't like that you had been starring at my sister" Sai said with the exact same tounge that an american on Earth would speak, English.
"Oh" the man looked down, "I am very sorry. She had jumped in front of me and pulled off my helmet."
Ameel starred at her brother an d the man as they spoke in a language she didn't know. Yet somehow her little brother knew the strange language. How this was possible she did not know. However she knew that something had happened, something important.
Alright this was the first chaptera nd only chapter I had wrote for this story. I know that alot had happened and in a way it may appear to be confusing. Even so please let me know what you think of this story so I can know if it is even worth continueing.
