Jimmy Stuart was a good kid. He was 14, never rebelled, he was happy, he had good friends and did well in school. He was bullied though. Older kids would pick on him because of his unique style or his height. The older kids had so many possible opportunities to hurt him. They took every one they got. It hadn't been too serious though until Christmas time. They'd egg his house and and leave little "presents" in his locker like dog shit or eggs that fell out when he opened it.
Christmas Day: Dec. 25th
Jimmy was at a friends house because he could never spend Christmas at home anymore. Every year for Christmas his dad left to visit family out of state and his mom spent it like a regular day. Till was Jimmys best friend and that's who he always spent Christmas with. He was walking home in the evening. Lee was an older boy who picked on him pretty often. He had gotten a BB gun as a gift and was out testing it with friends. Jimmy tried to avoid any contact. "Hey little shit!" Lee shouted, Jimmy kept walking. He didn't want trouble. Then he heard "Go hold him down Johnny."
Jimmy started running, being chased by Lee and 3 friends. Johnny caught up to Jimmy and pinned him to the ground. Lee stood over Jimmy and pointed the gun at him. "How about I test this on more than a bird guys?" He said. "No! Go away Lee..please just leave me alone!" Jimmy shouted, struggling to be released. BANG he heard. His ears rang and the world spun. It was a blur...then it went black. Lee yelled "Fuck, there's blood! Get outta here!" Jimmy heard running and panicked. He felt his body for pellets. He felt stinging but he didn't know where it was coming from. He felt his face.. his eyes.. he couldn't see.
Time Skip: Hospital
He woke up, his mom standing over him. "Jimmy, you're awake! What happened?" "I.. I don't remember" He lied. He remembered everything perfectly. He had to stay in the hospital for a while. Finally on January 3rd, his eyes had been completely removed and while having the option of prosthetics, he didn't want any. He liked the idea of being a kid with no eyes. It was different in a good way. He was 15 now. His birthday was January 2nd. With no eyes, Jimmy could still somehow see. This confused doctors, it was impossible! Jimmy thought it was great. He didn't care what anyone thought of the weird kid with no eyes.
End Of Introduction
OKAY SOOO.
HI. I've never written a story like this before and I thought why not start now. I love to write but never put it out for anyone else to read. So this is a good start I guess. Excuse the fact my story isn't that great yet but I promise it gets better as I continue. This is just the beginning. I'm definitely open to constructive criticism! Feel free to criticize.
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Finding Them
Mystery / ThrillerJimmy Stuart's a gone boy. Where's his dad, what's his mom doing, and where is he? He had gone missing. His kidnapper was close. It was only a matter of time.
