Chapter One

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"Dog" my Brother said as he stared at the drawing. "No" I laughed " You're  not trying" I complained. It was family night and we were playing charades for the hundredth time "ding dong" "I'll get it I said as I ran to the door. "Hey best" I said to Toriana my best friend. "Are you ready?" She asked after giving me a hug. I poked my head around the corner at my parents. "Mom, dad Tori's here we're about to go now" I said. "Kim we're almost done with the game" my mom protested. " You guys said I could leave at seven it's already 7:30" I say putting my jacket on "Fine but you have to call us before you go to bed" dad said before continuing the game. I say my goodbyes before I hurried behind Tori. We rushed to get in Juicy's car, she was the oldest out of us. "Here change in to this" Tori said as she handed me a tank top and a mini skirt. "I don't know about this I said with my face scrunched up. "Oh come on I promise this will be fun. We've never ever been to a club before. Tori pleaded. "yeah I know because we're under age." I said having second thoughts. It was Tori's plan to sneak into a club. I was totally down at first but I was starting to think this wasn't a good idea. "If your this nervous then maybe we should stay by Tori and have a movie night." Juicy suggested as she pulled off. "Oh my god, you guys can't be serious. We are definitely going! If you don't like it than we'll leave. But you can't knock it before you try it." Tori said. "Fine" I said rolling my eyes.
We went to Juicy's house because her mom was never home. It was a mad house as we all tried to get dressed. It was about 9:30 before all three of us was completely dressed. I had to admit we looked good. We could definitely pass for 18 not the 15, 16 and 17 year old girls we were. From Juicy's house to the club was only 15 minutes away so it didn't take us long at all to make it there. "You guys ready" Juicy said while handing us our fake IDs. Still nervous I said yea. We got out the car and headed to the line. "I got this" Juicy said walking up to the bouncer. She whispered something into his ear before he waved us over. "IDs" he said staring at me. I swear he was looking into my soul. I nervously reached him the fake ID. I hadn't noticed I was holding my breath until he reached me the ID back. He looked at Juicy then looked back at us before nodding. I breathed a sigh of relief, before walking into the club. I had never seen so many people in such a small space. I instantly started sweating. This club was so packed I no longer could see Tori, or Juicy. I tried standing on my tippy toes but me being only 4'11 I couldn't see over the crowd. I made my way over to the bar and sat down. Two very drunk girls stubbled over to the bar and sat next to me. "Omg did you see Q fine ass.?" The one who was clearly drunker than the other. "Girl what, that nigga is gone be in my bed tonight." The other one said. It amazed me how loose the females in Baton Rouge was. "Speaking of him, he's on his way over now" the drunk one said. The other girl and I both looked back. From the corner of my eye I could see her hike up her dress. I looked twice at the guy and it looked like the most popular guy at my high school, Quincy. But it was no way they were talking about him. Both women looked like they were in their late 20s. "Ladies you tryna get into something.?" He asked as soon as he came up to us. I snorted. Clearly they wouldn't fall for that. But to my surprise they seemed to be hot and bothered by him. After his eyes roamed their bodies he landed on me. "Kimmy? What you doing in here.?" He asked flashing his pearly whites. "Minding my business." I said turning back around. "Ugh hello? I'm sure you want a much more mature woman. So your focus should be on me." The slutty one said. "All three of us should get outta here." The drunk one followed suit. I just sat there shaking my head at the nonsense. Quincy leaned in while grabbing on them both. "Let's go!" I watched them leave. I couldn't believe how easy they were just going to give themselves up to him. A child. I looked around to see if I could see Tori or Juicy again but I couldn't tell. I got up and followed the sign that said bathroom cause I really had to pee. All the stalls seemed to be occupied. The last one caught my eye tho. It was halfway open. I could see Juicy on her knees giving the bouncer head. I couldn't believe what I was seeing. Tori walked in behind me and was loud she had clearly been drinking. I guess Juicy heard her voice cause she stopped and hurried to stand up. She came out of the stall wiping her mouth. I was completely disgusted by her actions. The bouncer came out behind her. "Really?" I said "Let's go NOW!" I yelled walking out. If they called this fun than they clearly didn't know what it was. The whole car ride was silent. After making it to Juicy house we all just laid down with out saying anything. It was now after 12 and I had missed calls and messages from my parents. I was to upset to call them so I just turned my phone off. I could listen to them yell tomorrow. Right now I just wanted to sleep.

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