Rudra and Saumya ka Kahaani

Episode 1

I am newly writing this story because I cannot bear seeing the original script making Saumya as villain/negative roll. So, I write this story according to my creativity. Please accept this story even there is a lot of lacking in this story.
Now they showing Soumya as a villain. As per my story, I would like to portray her as a saver of the Oberai's family.

The Oberai family united and humiliate Soumya because creating the problem in Rudra-Bhavya marriage. She gets humiliated and being push out of the house. They also accused that she is the cause of Rudra-Bhavya marriage stopped. Yes, the marriage of Rudra-Bhavya stopped because the havoc that happen due to Aryan statement but it resolve already and the Oberois find out it is Veer's plan. Back to story;
Rudra: Get out from this house, Soumya. I thought you re my friend but I didn't aspect that you.
Anika: Ha Soumya, I thought as my sister, we didn't aspect this kind of attitude from you.
Kalyani dadi: (Sadness voice) Kyu putthar, why you doing like this? You are my best friend granddaughter, then how could you do like this?
Saumya: I don't have answer for all of you question now.
Saumya going to left the house with the luggage. She turn around and look at all. She cry in her heart. She say in her mind (never mind saumya, you did everything for good of rudra and oberai's family. It's my family too even though rudra never though me as his wife.)
The Oberai's seeing Saumya left the house with relieved feeling even though they feel the sadness and heartbroken as the same time.
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Two years later,
Saumya now staying at Australia. She continue her studies. She try to forget all things that happen in her life two years ago. One day, she having her lunch in seaside restaurant. While having her meal, she waiting for her friend to join with her. Suddenly, she saw Rudra on the other side of the restaurant. She was shock with the presences of Rudra in this place. She feel hesitate whether wants to talk to him or not. But she keep silent and walk out from that place when she remember all the humiliation that received from Oberois and especially from Rudra who she loved one.
She is walking in the street with tears while remembering all the incidence happen in her life.
To be continue......

Precap,
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