The Carnival

Welcome to the Carnival (rewritten)

The story will be all rewritten to sound better and so that you can understand the story better the characters are the same and the plot but I'm making it better if you know what I mean. 

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

   The Carnival is like the biggest event here in Goldville because its so small that not many things happen around here. Our population is almost 200 people and almost every single person in this damn town will be at the carnival. I never like going just because I don't trust the carnival just because every year people just suddenly disappear. Anyway its just weird that they go missing every time the carnival comes around but this year I have to go with my friends.

   Since I'm about to take my SAT's and my ACT I have really been worried and stressed so my friends think that its a great idea to distract ourselves. I get out of the shower and quickly put on my white shirt, light yellow oversized hoodie, black jeans and white vans and I go down the stairs and plop on the sofa and turn on  the TV and wait for my sister, Halley . 

"ANGIE ARE YOU DONE?" I hear her yell as she comes down the stairs.

"YES"I yell back.

"I thought you were still getting dressed" she says in response

"Well I don't take hours changing like you" I say back

"Okay lets go I'm going to be late" she tells me

She turns the other way and roll my yes and turn off the TV and follow her out of the door. Each of us on our phones as we walk to the carnival and because we live so close it takes about 10 minutes to get there. Every year they use the same park and it like half of the town its just mostly dirt and some trees. When we get there Halley says goodbye and hands me 30 bucks and leaves with her friends. I see that both Lauren and David are waiting there. Lauren as always wearing her favorite black heels and a her short loose white dress and her hair loose. David was wearing a navy blue shirt and some well fitted light blue jeans. 

"Hey Angie" says David 

"Hi, where are the others" I ask 

"Well we came together but I mean they should be here any minute" Lauren answers 

I nod my head in agreement even though I don't know what I'm agreeing to. We are all our phones at this point. In the corner of my eye I see that the twins Sabrina and Adam wandering around. I put my phone away and look at Adam and he has on a pink tank top on with khaki shorts. Sabrina wearing red and white shorts with a crop top and some converse. They walk over once we make eye contact they head our way and we say our hellos until I notice my best friend Madison running our way and I run towards her and hug her cause I haven't seen her for a week since she went on a trip to New York. As always looking like a model she wears aa white short dress black heels and red earing with a matching necklace. We catch up for a while until the boy that I have a crush on Shawn arrives with Dylan. 

"Hey" I say with a smile 

"Hi how have you been " he asks

"I'm good you" I respond 

"I'm great" he says back with a smile. 

I notice that Sabrina is talking to Dylan who is wearing a his glasses,white shirt, blue jeans and his dress shoes. Shawn wearing black jeans, a burgundy hoodie, and some vans. We all talk for a while until we head over to the entrance where a clown is greeting everyone at the door but before we enter we get tickets. I check my phone and its 5pm and after we get the tickets we talk towards the entrance. The Clown saying the same thing over and over again. 

"Welcome to the Carnival"

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

I'm 100% more satisfied with this now hope you guys will like it better because its longer. I will try my best to have all 10 parts up by July 21. By the way I know that I unpublished all of the other books 2-6 but I will repost them all when they are all good enough.

What's your favorite show right now?