Two? But How?

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I don't know bout you guys but I'm picky with my seven minutes in Heaven 😅 ones I try to find are not to good for my liking. It's always so short and it feels very rushed. And I don't like it that way. So I decided why not write my own seven minutes in Heaven and have it to how I'd like it and hope you guys would like it as well. Cause literally the one I was reading was a seven minutes in Heaven but it was changed to twenty minutes in Heaven in the story and I swear it took me like two minutes to read it. It was like 'oh hey it's twenty minutes in Heaven now' and then all that happens is a kiss and being touched then bam twenty minutes is up already. Like the hell? It bothers me but yet I still read it😂 like legit the chapters are as long as this little thing I'm writing here and I really don't like that. But who am I to be so mean bout it? No one. I'm just speaking my mind about it. No one is a perfect writer I get that but sometimes there are just some stories I can't read all that well cause it feels rushed to me and just so short and out of place I dunno I'm weird. Anyways enough of that I'm pretty sure I bored you guys with that or those of you who actually read this stuff. Anyways I won't be making anymore of this and just let you guys slide right into the story, no interruptions, unless I have a joke to say of course.

Anyways hope you enjoy the story!

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"Ah! Y/N(Your Name) there you are! I was starting to worry you wouldn't show up!" Splendor said as you walked up to him. "Well, I said I'd come Splendy, you know I keep my promises."
Splendy smiled at you and gave you a quick hug. Out of all the CreepyPastas you know, Splendorman has become your best friend in an instant. Tonight he was throwing a party in the slender mansion and invited you to go along. You agreed to it since you had nothing better to do. When you left your house you deiced to wear a F/C (favorite color) crop-top with some black jeans and vans. Your H/L (hair Length) H/C (Hair Color) hair was down flowing freely in the wind of the night.
"Well let's head to the party now!" Splendy practically yelled out. You both started your way to the Mansion.
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Once you guys arrived you were greeted with the wonderful smell of F/F (Favorite Food). Your stomach growled.
"Hey look who's here everyone!" Splendor yelled out to everyone. Everyone waved hi and some greeted you with hugs. After the greetings you told Slpendor that you're going to the kitchen to eat, Splendor nodded his head and you saw him go over to OfferderMan and slap the red rose out of his hand and take Sally away from the guy. You chuckled lightly and headed off to the amazing smells coming from the kitchen. Once there, you saw many kinds of food that were nice and ready to eat, you also saw a table filled with nothing but sweets, another table had snacks, like chips and so on. You're mouth watered.
"Child, you're drooling" you heard a voice say. You jumped, wiped the drool from your mouth and saw who the voice belonged to. "Sorry about that Slender" You say sheepishly while rubbing the back of your neck. "It's quite alright, now I must insist that you hurry and eat before it all goes." He says calmly. You nod your head and start digging in.
Once you finished eating, you still had room for something sweet. You went to the table and stared at all your options to have. Everything looked so delicious that you couldn't decide. "Try the cheesecake, it's absolutely the best" you know that voice, it belonged to Masky. When you turned you saw him and Hoddie there, you smiled at them and decided to get some cheesecake. "Thanks for the tip" you say and you fill your mouth with the delicious sweet. "Oh this is so good~" you moaned out. You heard chuckles from the two men who were serving themselves some cheesecake as well.
You all went to the table and sat together talking about random things while eating the cheesecake. You never minded being with Hoodie and Masky, these two were the second best to hang out with.
About ten minutes later you heard Splendorman yell for everyone to go into the living room. You three got up and headed out to the living room where the rest of the CreepyPastas were. "We're going to be playing seven minutes in Heaven!" He yelled. There were a few groans around us but those of us who wanted to play cheered. BEN took off his hat and gave it to Splendor, one by one all the males started putting their things in the hat while the ladies had to look away. Finally you girls were all allowed to look back again. Splendor came to you, he gave you a quick wink and pulled your arm to the front of the room. You groaned, You didn't want to be first but knowing Splendor he will always try and get you first.
"Y/N will be going first!" There were a few whistles and claps that could be heard from the crowd.

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