When i wrote the mistake i wanted the ending to be a cliff hanger. Almost as the whole point of the story was point less.
OK THATS IT!
did they leave? good.
alright so the mistake was hard to write. I wanted cloud to be a like able character. He wasn't going to be snappy, grump, crying that jazz.
Cloud was hard to work with. I think the most hard part was writing chapter 4. I wanted the scene to be trippy yet smart. Its till my fav screen. I also based it off this scourge map so please check that out. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=teIeNkgOd_M&t=52s
Anyways i wanted the screen to be brain washing. I wanted cloud to fell like he was going insane. I wanted everything to mean something.
The glass meant cloud felling like every moment he wasted was closer to his sister Armani dying.
The water was showing some what of his death. No one would help him and he felt alone.
over all this book was pain in (BUNS!) sure eclipse.
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