This is actually my second story and my first post. Haha I know. It sucks. But post your opinions belowwww please. Please and thank you. Because I'm sure that will help my writing. Umm also I dunno if other writers have this happen too, but when I read over my story over and over and over it begins to sink in that it's a horrible piece of work. xD I'm not kidding. I only posted it because my friend June136 (Who is a much Much MUCh better writer than I) was ordering me to.
Comment please?
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Her footsteps were barely audible as she crashed through the forest. Tears of rage streamed down her face, yet she kept running.
Faster! Faster! He will not get away! I can't let him! He's mine! My prey!---
The girl let loose a blood-curdling shriek as she felt her anger take hold.
The pain was agonizing. Her body was being ripped apart. Skin tore into pieces, her bone breaking through, growing and collapsing.
Changing, strengthening, her whole skeleton was being upgraded.
Spitting out a terrifying roar, the girl impossibly sped up.
She was already inhumanly fast, but now, in her new form, she was a blur. Though unfortunately, the man she was chasing could easily outrun her for miles more.
She could hear him. Less than a mile away now, laughing psychotically, his breathing quickened.
I'll kill you! I'll kill you! I'll kill you! You will NOT get away will what you've done! I have to f-
A horrible keening could be heard from far away, sounding as a pained roar, fading into a scream.
That was, in fact, exactly what it was.
She lay on the cold dirt floor crying, bleeding, and panting.
Black dots clouded her vision as she tried to focus on the moon.
Gasping, her throat closed up, and the girl blacked out.
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"...vy! Envy!" someone screamed.
She felt her body being lifted.
Why is it so dark?
"Envy!
Envy? What did you do!?"
That voice...It sounds like...
Her eyes fluttered open, dialating with the sudden brightness.
Shade was looking down at her, concern stamped all over his face. He had his arms around her, one across her shoulders and the other under her knees.
Hugging her tighter to his body, he quickened his pace.
"Put me down!!" She whined. Grunting, Envy attempted to wiggle her way out of his arms, but he held on.
"Stop that", he snapped.
A strange look crossed his face and his voice softened.
"You're injured enough already."
With a heavy sigh, Shade kicked the door to his house open.
The paint, colors worn pale, was peeling away, and bullet holes were splattered across the thick piece of wood.
His door, like the rest of his "lovely" sanctuary, was falling apart..
So why should he care if his shoe left a mark?
He stomped up the stairs, still carrying her.
Heart race increasing, she began to babble.
"Where are we going What happened? Why..Why are you carrying me?"
She was still thrashing around as they entered a room. Silently setting Envy on the bed, Shade placed a palm on her forehead,
"You have a high fever, you've broken three ribs and your left wrist. The muscles in your legs
and arms are all torn up. And you a-" he stopped and frowned down at her.
"What are you doing, Vee?
She was unsuccessfully trying to pull herself off the bed. Wincing she glared up at him.
"Would you please just heal me already?" she asked.
Shade closed his eyes, dark brows knitting together.
"What?! You have to think about it?!"
His eyes snapped open and he was in her face, "Yes! I do have to think about it! And no! I'm not going to heal you! You're body can heal on its own!
I need it to heal slowly so you don't go running off so soon!"
Something flickered in the girl's eyes.
"Where's Sky?" she asked softly.
Sighing, he wrapped his arms around her and carried her out of the room.
Walking slowly down the hall, Shade softly opened a door and stepped inside.
The room was dark, nearly pitch back.
The only light was pulsating in the far corner of the room.
A tiny night light was barely illuminating the source of breathing.
Envy's eyes easily adjusted to the darkness, taking in the outline of a child sleeping in a bed,
Their soft breathing causing their body to shudder with each intake,
"What's wrong with her?"
Shade didn't miss the hitch in her voice.
"Please don't cry, Vee. Her ribs. She has a couple cracked ribs that's all."
Walking over, he carefully laid his friend next to her sister, and padded out of the room.
The door closed with a soft click.
