First night in sleeper coach

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My first os on Raglak. I tried something. Hope you like it.

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A man is shown who is looking out from the window. He gets a phone call. In phone"the war is declared by enemy country. You have to be present by tomorrow night" call ends.
His determined face is shown and is revealed to be Laksh.

His determined face is shown and is revealed to be Laksh

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He passes by a room and stops listing someone's talks.

Girl 1: it's not like what you are thinking. I know he loves me.

Girl 2: but he is a army man.

Girl 1: so what. He loves his country. He want to save his country with full dedication and determination. Can't he love his wife and make her happy??
Girl 1 is revealed to be Ragini.

 Can't he love his wife and make her happy??Girl 1 is revealed to be Ragini

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Girl 3: ok baba. We know you never listen to us. Whatever we are happy with your decision. We will leave now bye, saying Girl 2&3 who are friends of Ragini leaves from there.
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Flashback

Laksh is army officer. He came to his town. He sees that a mall is caught fire. He rescues the people and the children who caught in fire accident. And there Ragini sees him and fell in love with him on first site for his helping nature, bravery and determination. She confess her parents about her feelings on Laksh. Her parents talks with his parents. They to agree for the alliance and Raglak marriage happens.
FB ends
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Laksh who is listening all this feels lucky and proud of getting her as his wife.
He stands in front of her then says"I got a call, so I should leave tomorrow"

Ragini gets sad.

Laksh: So, I thought before going we should spend some time with each. other.
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FB
On marriage day, he receives a message so he leaves for the war. Because of that, they cannot spend some time with each other. Now he returned after 3 years.
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He thinks to spend some time with her before going. He want to book a room for them but unfortunately no rooms are available because of marriage season. If they go to friends house and spend time it will not be good.

Laksh: my flight is at 2pm. I booked a sleeper coach for us. It leaves at 10 am. It reaches near airport at 01:45 pm so I will leave from there.
She nods ok for that.
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The train goes around the city showing different places of that city from train.

A sleeper coach is shown which is separated from other coaches. Nothing can be visible or heard from others.

In a sleeper coach, we see that lying on the mat kissing each other passionately. They are sweating profusely in AC compartment. And their faces are shown to be Laksh and Ragini

They breaks the kiss when there is lack of oxygen

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They breaks the kiss when there is lack of oxygen. He traces her jawline with his lips. He comes down to her neck kissing and bites there. She slowly moans his name. Then goes down to her belly, to kiss her milky skin but the cloth on her waist stops him.
Laksh says"no enemies should be there in the war and no barriers should be there in love"

Next minute their clothes are separated from them and they consumate after 3years of separation of their marriage. Like this they spend their first night in sleeper coach.
Only 15 minutes is there to reach airport. So they wear there clothes.
At airport he bids bye to her and leaves.
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After two days news is telecasted that"the war ended, army officers are fine and some are slightly injured"

Next day Ragini is shown waiting for Laksh at airport.
Along with her sleeper coach is also waiting for them.

The end
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Hope it's not boring.
Thank you for reading.
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⏰ Last updated: Jul 03, 2018 ⏰

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