Alanis had always wanted to leave the settlement she lived in ever since she was a little girl. Together, she and her childhood friend, would sneak outside the walls of their settlement, and go on make believe adventures. They would fight and slay m...
Welcome to the original and somewhat polished version of Something Lost. At this time I am sifting through the entire story. Most of it will remain the same. There may be changes in dialog, ie. added talks and more detailed descriptions.
Changes you will find:
• Story told in 3rd person instead of 1st.
• Some minor plot changes. ie. added dialog, descriptions, and glossary for the Old Tongue language.
• And added artwork, which may or may not be added as I update the chapters.
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Alanis Elis - work in progress Art by me, Lis Esler
I wrote and completed Something Lost back in 2012. It's painfully clear that my writing improved as I wrote the story, so the earlier parts are hard to read. I will be editing the first book to pair with the second book in the series, Something Found.
If you happen to be reading Something Lost for the first time I will be editing this particular draft to reflect the polished version. Once edits have been completed I will be hiding this copy as it was the original draft. Please feel free to read this version, but know that there will be changes as I edit. As the parts will be in 3rd person and change to 1st as you read on to the parts I haven't edited.
As always it is very much appreciated if you vote, comment, and follow me if you want to get the latest updates. I do welcome comments and critiques, just don't be rude about them. Thank you!
