"Alright, I'm really bad at making stories, but I'm just gonna try it.
This story starts in the land of Merina, this magical country has always been good friends with their neighbors country Estria. In the capital (edit) of Merina there is a tower, which is called the ¨Tower of Maggots¨. Not such a nice name. That was what I was thinking when I walked down the stairs. Well I thought that every morning when I walked down. Oh I should first introduce myself. I am Bris, and I have lived in this tower for my whole life, together with my brother Aniki. I am 15 years old, and well so is my brother. That's because we are twins. That's sometimes really fun, except if you are identical twins... Well there is one thing how you can see if it's me or him: his hair, it's blue, like really blue. And well, its natural. That's strange because I don't have it. Well anyway, I was down now and I saw Aniki making breakfast. Yum, he is a really good cook. When you smell the food, you get hungry, even if you have eaten a few minutes before. That's the reason why the WHOLE city comes here to buy their food. This tower is really well known for its delicious food. 'Hey bro come here, sit!' I sighed 'I am NOT your dog' But I did walk over and I started to eat. 'Good doggy~' he said teasingly. Well that's how my brother is, he can be really fun, but he can also be really annoying... And then, when no one expected it. BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! You could hear it everywhere. The tower was shaking, the ground was shaking, and so, we were shaking. There was so much sound and noise. 'What the heck was that?!' Aniki shouted. 'Seriously? If I knew I would have warned you!' I screamed back. I runned up a few stairs and looked out of the window. I don't know if you have ever seen maggots. Well these you don't want to see.. Ugh. They were with much much MUCH! And they looked really creepy, like with a lot of spikes everywhere on their body. And the eyes were really big and looked really creepy. 'Iki-kun! There are maggots!' I shouted down. I always call him that. 'I really don't care, you are big enough to not be afraid of them!' was the answer. Ugh, that baka. 'Now what DO you see up there' 'MAGGOTS! I told you!' 'I'll come up!' Yeah, wel, do that. I don't care. But, he will get the shock of his life. That's revenge for all the times he put spiders in my room. It's not like I'm afraid of spiders, but THESE spiders will scare everyone. They are magically big and poisonous, and scary, spiky, purple. Ugh! You don't want to see those. Especially not in your bedroom with your big brother laughing in the door opening... -_- 'WHAT THE HECK ARE THOSE?!?!' Wow. 'Maggots, I told you' I said again. 'What do we do?' he asked. 'You are always bragging about being the big, smart and strong big brother. Even though you are only 2 minutes older than me. You find a way to deal with them!' I walked down the stairs, grabbed my breakfast, shouted to everyone to follow me if they don't want to be maggot-food. Because most likely I'll end up having to do the work anyway. So I'll first make sure the guests are safe and out of my way, I don't want to drown them. Luckily everyone heard about the maggots and they followed me up the stairs, past Aniki and into the living quarters.
tower, maggots attack
horse sell man, lives in the tower aswell, always been not-kind
we buy Belle & Storm, then the other horses start looking sad, and we decide to steal them, as we didn't have the money to buy them all. (8 horses in total) (Sprinter, Saphy's horse) (Tag) (Blossom) (Titan) (Mirato (boy) & Mirino -siblings-)
We flew away from the upper balcony of the tower
When we were a few villages away we landed
We landed in front of a farm
The farmer and his family were really kind
Father, mother, Maria (big sis) & Esther (little sis) and their cat Tomy, and their maid Elise
Aniki had an eye on Elise, me on Maria
Esther is really sweet and we became friends
We started to continue our journey and as the maggots chase us the family goes with us
at a city further on we met a girl, she was washing her pet monkey Fluffy in a fountain, her name was Saphira, but she wanted us to call her Saphy
Saphy goes with us as she is an orphan and doesn't live anywhere anyway
We hire a boy who can tell us how to ride to Estria, his name is Eren
Eren wants to go with us to there, and he wants to stay after aswell, since he has never been there and wants to explore and make maps
Saphy seems to have an eye for Eren
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And well that's why we are riding to the neighbors country right now. I wish we can always stay together. We are like one big family."
Yap, It's really bad, you don't have to tell me. If anyone wants to use this as inspiration; go ahead. You can just change it into your own story.
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Horses of Hope - Maggots of Darkness
Short StorySo this is just a part of a story I wrote about a year ago. It's really weird and I just added a few things extra. But I never got to go on with it. Just don't mind the grammar mistakes and the story altogether.