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Reviewing this material, there are quite a lot of points in which I would like to address. For a start, these "chapters" are far too short to qualify as a full "chapter." My second issue with this story, is the simple fact that the character "Not Liv" [NOW REFERRED TO AS S2] has an extreme change of "dialect," switching frequently from a more proper English, to a less formal form of speaking... While riddled with mistakes and inconsistencies, I must praise the use of a sort of "texting" format. I do not believe this to be the first instance of this, but this method has a lot of potential for an interesting POV. This being said, I do believe that a story like this would fare better on "Tap," rather than on the main wattpad platform.

Official Note Of Recognition By Lord Machis

Based upon this, I would recommend moving this story to the barely passable category, as it does not seem purely heretical. We must provide some sort of leeway to the public. This report is to remain open for further review.

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Final Intent - Intent of Knowledge

DEEMED PASSABLE

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