Troubled souls

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Bad boy

"Um, can you move? I need to get a drink" I said angrily. Come on a man needed to let some steam off what was taking them so long.

I don't know how to introduce myself. Former son. Former best friend . Former twin-brother. 18-year old senior grieving the loss of people who mattered most to me. I am trying to get my life on track but when a life altering things comes to your doorstep you get confused, well at least in my case. The thing that landed on my doorstep is a fake head with a letter on the bottom

'Hello Edward,
You are the new Red Blood Society gang leader. We are a gang, and you're our leader. It ran in you the family but you were lost to the system in that sad night your whole family died. Your parents have instructed us to tell you that you were never a normal kid, you'll never be a normal kid nor will you raise normal kids. If you don't accept this life your head will be sent to your other family members who will learn to accept this. I hope you understand that this is serious and your only choice is to live a dangerous life or die dangerously. They're is many perks to being a gang leader. First off you're filthy rich. You can have anything you want, any girl you want or boy. If you swing that way. Come to the 7/11 close to your house and be ready to be taken to your new house on Sunday. You have plenty time to think this over. Either die or live. Your choice.'I wasn't sure who it was from but I'm pretty sure the letter wasn't supposed to tell me who wrote it.

Now I'm at a party drinking my organs out because I have a choice to be rich and dangerous or dead and well dead. Well today is Friday and I have till Sunday to choose.

"Damn, fine ass you got there Jane, can I touch it? Plea-" a random guy pukes on me. My favorite converse shoes. My only converse shoes. I need new shoes. Maybe I should become a gang leader. Honestly I have no choice I'm becoming a gang leader and that's final. Well I am drunk, should I be making choices like this. What would I even do, not a good time to think about it. Need to forget about this situation.

"Hey Edward I'm sorry about your shoes is there any way I can help you clean them," she yells because of the loud music. And I take a minute to look at her dragging my eyes up and down her body. She has big blue eyes and nice tits. That's what I need for tonight.

"I have a way you can help me," I say smirking at her. And she blushes. What can I say my big green eyes just drag in the beauties into staring and all the work I did in construction helped with my build. So I am a woman killer. What, I think with what happened to me these few days I deserve to give myself the hype and a nice back pat.

Without a second thought she starts to walk to one of the rooms. While she walks she move her hips like a lady with a mission so I think that all blushing and shy girl was just acting, don't mind though at least not too much.

We go into the room and she attacks my lips before I can talk and pushes me close to the bed. I just go to where she's moving me. That look in her eyes isn't innocent anymore. She places her hand on my belt but where not there yet. I flip us so I'm on top. I start kissing her lips first. Than I travel down her neck with kisses while opening her shirt right when it get good, another smoking hot girl walks in while she's on the phone. Wearing a tight dress showing me a fit and curvy girl. Sorry big blues but you have met your match.

"I'm f*ckin*g done with you cheating bastard if you call me again I might, as a matter of fact I WILL cut your small wiener off,"she yells on her phone. Than looks at us. Surprised and annoyed and I think that's when I fall in love with big brown eyes. 
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