The Day we have 1D in our lives

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  Brooklyn as brooklyn                                                                                                                                  hair  brown,medium hair

 age 20 almost 21

                                            Brooklyn's Prov

"Cristina wake up your going to be late for school" i yell at the bottom of the stairs. "I'm commin im commin" ok jeez i mumble. Lets go i need to take you to school you don't want to be late on the first day of seventh grade. and i got to get to collage .

                                                           Cristina's Prov

  Why is it every morning I'm woken up by my older sister ughhh. i get on my dress and do my hair grab my bag and head down stairs.I grab a apple and head to the car. i get in to see all of Brooklyn's friends sitting in the back i see Aspen ,Ali, Elizabeth(aka Liz), Jordan,and my sister.

                                                        Brooklyn's Prov

    i start the car and drive away for the house. Two minutes later we get to her school she hops out and meets her friends Ali jumps in the front and four miles later we are at the collage. I look around for a parking i finaly find one and park in it we all get out and go to are dorms me and ali share one.

                                                                    Ali's  Prov 

     We arrive and get to the dorms be and Brooklyn settle in  we grab are books anf head to are first class time flew by fast next thing i know were at lunch.

                                                                Brooklyn's prov

  we are at luch i see the tickets are on sell to a one d concert so i tell  Liz,Ali , Jordan and Aspen. then i buy vip tickets for all of us yes and my little sister. HEY GUYS GUESS WHAT!!!! what they all say. I GOT US VIP TICKETS TO ONE DIRECTION!!!! they all scream when? tonight  

i get ready for the concert two hours before the concert i put on a crock top and short shorts and a pear of converse. i curl my hair and put a black Bennie. I get all my friend and we start to head there but on our way we see a limo and one d logo on the side the boys look at us  with out us knowing then rool don the window  and wave i roll down are window and we all say hi. They ask us where we were going and i told them that we were going to there concert and got VIP backstage tickets. they said well we'll see you there babes. We rolled up our window and so did they then we screamed our heads off.So once we got there we were first in line so we got to chose our seats so we chose the middle front row. We waited for the boys to pop up and the girls screaming so once that happened they started singing That What Makes  You Beautiful.

                                                               Chapter 2

 Once the concert was over Cristina and her 2 friends went home. We went backstage and met the boys.they asked what our names were I'm Brooklyn that's Jordan aspen Liz and Ali."well hi Brooklyn,Ali,Liz,Jordan and aspen.How old are you guys?I'm 20 almost 21and the rest of them are 22.

                                                                   1D prov

N=niall   Lo=louis   Li=liam   H=harry    Z=Zayn

N: well be right back

the girls:ok well be right here