Sword Origin online (Asuna's story)

Part one- What have i done?

Introduction- I'm Asuna Yuuki, I'm known as the lightning flash on SAO and most VRMMO's. 6 months ago, everyone, and even my close friends were trapped inside a game called "Sword art online" (SAO) Due to its designer, Akihiko Kayaba. We all watched many die, and live through it. None of it was peaceful or fun.

I walked down the chilly street, the air felt amazing against my face. I forgot how amazing a real breeze felt. Sword art online is not fun to remember, but I can't help but think about it everyday. Wondering what I could have done different, who I could've saved, or spared... but no matter how I look at it, there was nothing more I could do. I know I served everyone well and fought for everyone's sake, but part of me feels like I didn't do enough... I looked up to see a beautiful Sakura tree, it's petals were drifting through the wind. It looked so magical, like a dream. I got a text on my phone, it was from Kirito, my boyfriend. (Kirito was also a famous survivor, he also achieved many original skills that earned him his fame. ) I checked my text and it said "Asuna, there is another VRMMO that just came out. It's called SOO (Sword origin online)" I replied "Okay I'll try it. I'm heading home" I walked into my house and up the stairs. I put on my nerve gear, and said "Link start" apparently, it was an add-on to SAO, so it was free for everyone who played sword art online already. I felt my body go numb, I couldn't feel a muscle, I tried to move, but I had no control. The game loaded and it looked like SAO, but bigger. The town of beginnings was also much larger than I once saw. I was looking through the game tutorial, and it said "Initial body anti-control software" I  clicked on it to see more about it. It said "Dear players, this experience may feel much different than the regular SAO and VRMMO you usually play. That's because, the new software is going to make your body uncontrollable and numb. You won't be able to move or quit the game until you complete a daily quest. However, to recreate the SAO experience, whenever your attacked, your body will feel the pain in real life. That's why the software must make you numb, to create pain when programmed." I gasped and closed out the page. Why would they create such a thing? Don't they understand SAO wasn't a good experience? It was traumatic and awful. I watched my friends die! I almost died myself! I felt tears dripping down my cheeks, not only virtually, but in real life. I looked at the daily quest and it said "Beat The gleam eyes. "
-Has 10 heath bars
-Must use 2 original skills
- Must not get a red heath bar
-Pain is on extreme mode
-Be warmed, extreme pain is quite painful***

I knew I had to do this, if I didn't I'd be in here for another week or so. I can do it right?

I accepted the quest and breathed heavily. I took out my rapier, and looked the beast in the eyes. I ran with speed straight to the gleam eyes, and tried to pierce its body with my sword. But this battle felt weird, my sword was heavy, it felt way to real... I cut its shoulder blade and Doug deeper with speed. The beasts heath bar went down by one, which meant I had 9 left to destroy. I aimed for the heart, and slashed the monster with a 25 hit combo. I grabbed the rapier and held it perfectly in line to the monsters torso. I sliced its claw off and watched as it had 7 heath bars left. I decided to do an original skill. Kirito had taught me the starburst stream. I put In all my energy and ripped it pice by piece, I felt my arms growing swore. I slashed every inch of its body over and over, before I knew it I had got a 58 hit combo! I kept going until their was 2 heath bars left. I gave in every ounce of strength into my fighting. I hit the monster at a running pace. The monster was defeated, but I felt a sharp pain in my arm. I completed the quest and achieved 5,000 col. I exited the game and saw a  a few Huge bruises on my left arm. I felt pain in my neck as well. Maybe SOO isn't just a game..... maybe it's the start of another trick?